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Hawkeye (Kate Bishop) vs. Cybermen (Mondasian)

MATCH SCORE
Hawkeye (Kate Bishop): 5
Cybermen (Mondasian): 2

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Space Power Rangers vs. Stormtroopers vs. The Alien

MATCH SCORE
Space Power Rangers: 4
Stormtroopers: 0
The Alien: 1

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12:7 - Alexandra Amberson vs. Danger Room

MATCH SCORE
Alexandra Amberson: 4
Danger Room: 9

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12:7 - Calender Man vs. Rainbow Archer

MATCH SCORE
Calender Man: 6
Rainbow Archer: 4

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12:7 - The Burger King vs. Flo (Progressive)

MATCH SCORE
The Burger King: 6
Flo (Progressive): 9

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12:7 - Artemis vs. Odin

MATCH SCORE
Artemis: 5
Odin: 8

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12:7 - Battle Droids vs. Clonetroopers

MATCH SCORE
Battle Droids: 0
Clonetroopers: 14

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12:7 - Tallahassee (Zombie Land) vs. The Town of Silent Hill

MATCH SCORE
Tallahassee (Zombie Land): 4
The Town of Silent Hill: 7

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12:7 - The Overlook Hotel vs. Din Djarin

MATCH SCORE
The Overlook Hotel: 4
Din Djarin: 11

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12:7 - Pele vs. Cúchulainn

MATCH SCORE
Pele: 5
Cúchulainn: 4

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12:7 - Android 8 vs. Midnighter

MATCH SCORE
Android 8: 9
Midnighter: 3

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12:7 - The Flash (Wally West) vs. Superman

MATCH SCORE
The Flash (Wally West): 6
Superman: 7

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12:7 - The Invid vs. The Romulan Star Empire

MATCH SCORE
The Invid: 7
The Romulan Star Empire: 6

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12:7 - Lucky the Leprechaun vs. Snap, Crackle, and Pop

MATCH SCORE
Lucky the Leprechaun: 7
Snap, Crackle, and Pop: 5

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12:7 - The Qu (All Tomorrows) vs. The Cylons

MATCH SCORE
The Qu (All Tomorrows): 4
The Cylons: 8

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12:7 - Michonne vs. Monster Island

MATCH SCORE
Michonne: 2
Monster Island: 11

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12:7 - Apollo vs. Quetzalcoatl

MATCH SCORE
Apollo: 9
Quetzalcoatl: 2

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12:7 - Tony the Tiger vs. Dig 'em Frog

MATCH SCORE
Tony the Tiger: 8
Dig 'em Frog: 3

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12:7 - Scar (Disney) vs. David Xanatos

MATCH SCORE
Scar (Disney): 5
David Xanatos: 9

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12:7 - Mario vs. Willy the Hillbilly

MATCH SCORE
Mario: 3
Willy the Hillbilly: 10

Match 14376 The Punisher vs. J and K, the Men in Black


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War Journal Entry #420-

A string of kidnappings has me on the hunt. These disgusting perverts are the lowest forms of scum I deal with and they must be dealt with quickly before they can continue they're terror.

I gathered the intel I needed and tracked down my target. I can't decide what i want to kill this piece of shit with yet so I leave myself with some options. I lock and load with an M-16, a pistol grip 12-gage, a Dessert Eagle, a couple Flashbangs and a Knife.Quietly making my way up to the house i sneak through an window after checking the door to find it locked. Once I am inside the perverts house i notice the basement light is on. I proceed down the basement and am greeted with a menacing but expected sight....Blood.....Bones. But what i see next has me baffled.

As i get toward the bottom of the stairs I see a strange gray substance. I enter the basebent and at my feet is a massive creature that looks out of this world with a hole the size of bowling ball blasted out of his stomach. A little girl is crying in the corner but she is not the only one in the room.

Standing in the middle of the room are two men. The one on the left, the younger of the two and black. The one on the right, an older white man. Both men wore black suits and black ties. And both had biggest, most bizzare guns i have ever seen in my life!

I knew there was no time for questions. I ready my weapons and prepare for battle!

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The Punisher

Read more about The Punisher at Wikipedia

Official Site: Marvel Comics Links: The Punisher's Wikipedia page IMDB Punisher The Punisher Archives

 

J and K, the Men in Black

Read more about J and K, the Men in Black at Wikipedia

Official Site: Sony Pictures Links: Wikipedia "Men in Black" page imdb "Men in Black" page "Men in Black II" official page

 

 

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The fight is a tough call. Despite their more powerful weapons, J and K may be in trouble. Their best bet is to neuralize him as he won't know not to look.

 

It's a good idea for a match and I like the idea of using the Punisher's war journal as a framing device. He is slightly out of character, attacking the agents with no idea whether they're the abductors or the girl's rescuers. There are also a few grammar errors and several typos. My favorite is the Dessert Eagle, which I'm guessing is a gun that shoots pies. :D

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This is decent for a return match, E-Rock. The story here has some potential. Still, as mentioned, Frank is kind of out of character here. He wouldn't just attack J and K out of the blue, and possibly not at all if he were to find out what they're about. Also, the match could've used some line spacing and proofreading.

 

If they were to fight for real, the Punisher would give the agents a hell of a time, though I'd imagine K would give Frank a tough time, too, with his own experience. 

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Yea I agree kind of out of character but I figured thats the only way they would end up fighting

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Match Final Results

USER RATINGS

Dinsdale Piranha gives it a grade of: B Good match but it needs more proofreading.

Confession FPT gives it a grade of: B Sorta short, but not bad.

DSkillz gives it a grade of: C Story has potential, but as mentioned, the Punisher is a bit out of character, and the match itself could've used some line spacing and proofreading.

SCORE

The Punisher: 8

J and K, the Men in Black: 6

FPA: 2.7

 

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