Guest MikeEB Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Annihilator didn't even touch the door; he tore it off its hinges with telekinesis as he walked in. When he scanned the nearby minds for Blackwood, he noticed a woman thinking about her gun. "Shoot yourself". He heard a gunshot and a cry of pain behind him as he hurried through the waiting room. Chairs flew as he passed, dumping their occupants and then clubbing them. Then a second shot went off. A burst of pain rattled his chest. He turned and saw the same woman, crouching and aiming. "How?" he gasped. Hazel shifted more weight off her injured leg as she pulled the trigger. "You didn't say where." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bergy_Berg Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 This is probably the most micro a fic could be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Nihlium Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 This is probably the most micro a fic could be. Imagine if he wrote a haiku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkender Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 I was assuming there'd be more... Write more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MikeEB Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 I don't see any reason to draw the story out more than necessary. But since you insisted, I removed another ten words. (Besides, this is a better description of Annihilator's powers than the one on his character sheet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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