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Pirates: 1
Cowboys: 3

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Sogetsu Kazama: 1
Jin Kazama: 3

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Chun-Li: 2
Rachel (Ninja Gaiden): 5

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Baron Zemo: 3
Khan Noonien Singh: 0

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Shiki (Samurai Shodown): 4
Yang: 0

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Leonardo (Mirage): 3
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Uchiha Itachi: 3
Nasty Boys: 2

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Raphael (Mirage): 6
Iori Yagami: 4

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Michael Myers: 0
Jason Voorhees: 4

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Domino (Marvel Comics): 2
Cybermen (Mondasian): 3

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Clonetroopers: 0
Orcs: 11

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Lucky the Leprechaun: 9
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Copperhead: 5
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Mandrill: 7
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Match 13761 Spawn vs. Predator


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2 punks run down an alley to do what punks think is a good time, one has a red baseball hat backwards, with a piercing in his lip, gripping in his sweaty hands is a gasoline container which he splashes upon the bum who wakes up startled, the man next to his wields a baseball bat that soon collides with the bum's skull. He lets out a ear piecing cry, enough to awaken demons...it has. But not the reckless not so hero protecter, Spawn, but otherwise something not from any earthly realm. As the first punk's head slices clean off with no remorse, blood splatters against the hard concrete wall that the pierced fool is next to be struck by a spear and rammed straight through the wall.

 

--------------------------------------------------------6 hours later-----------------------------------------------------

 

Poilce Sirens fill the dreadful night with sorrow and pain, over 16 poilce cars and 4 ambulances have arrived to clean up the mess, but these men and woman aren't alone, a silent figure leaps into the alley lashing out a chain that grabs the awkward but yet powerful spear from the wall.

 

Spawn: This hasn't to do with Hell or Heaven, this is a handcrafted spear...

 

Off the edge ears hang from a rope.

 

Spawn: What sick and twisted person would-

 

Suddenly everything changes, just like any other victim of the predator Al..now know as Spawn travels through time, light, and space to awaken falling out of the sky towards green trees. At the last moment Spawn releases the parachute and descends into the wilderness.

 

Spawn: When I find the idiotic punk who did this I will rip him limb from limb and send him off to Hell

 

Just then a strange feeling comes over Spawn...

 

Spawn: Am I being watched?

 

Spawn's unhuman instinct warns him of a evil presence, just then Spawn's supersensed hearing captures noise of a growl...or is it a call? Spawn countinues to study his surroundings when his first trap catches him in a net which is sliced open within a matter of seconds by Spawn's powerful claws.

 

Spawn: I ain't got all day, COME ON!

 

Then the Predator appears ready to catch it's prey.

 

Spawn: A cloaking device? Who are you?

 

The Predator pops battle claws from it's metal knuckles and studies it's prey as it begins to circle Spawn, and then lashes out slicing Spawn's cape and triggering a fight, Spawn lashes out with a pack of quick and strong jabs and punches which only catches the predator off guard. Spawn has no choice but to use his powers, he uses them wisely though, for they do slow and tire him alot, the power snaps and breaks the enemy's limbs which makes it tumble to the ground.

 

Spawn: Now like I said, who are you?!

 

Spawn unknowingly pulls the Predator's helmet off to see the hideous monster.

 

Spawn: WHAT THE HELL?!

 

At that moment millions, maybe billions of Predators uncloak themselves surrounding Spawn.

 

Spawn: Ok then, let's finish this.

 

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TELL ME WHO WINS IN THE COMMENTS BELOW!

 

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You're continuing to improve at crafting stories, batmanking, but you still could watch for mistakes in grammar, punctuation, etc. 

 

As for the match, exactly how many Predators are fighting here, and at what level of power is Spawn?

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:unsure:  havn't thought of that one

 

Yeah, there's nowhere near enough room for billions of Predators to operate in an city. Hell, India is way overcrowded with a population of over a billion citizens, and it's just over a third the size of the USA. These are things you have to think through when writing. 

 

But I guess we'll be working with this matchup. Depending on Spawn's power in this match, this is a massive stomp either way. If this is Spawn when he first acquired his powers, billions of Predators would overwhelm him within fractions of a second. If this is Spawn when he's mastered his powers, he'd be a huge threat to both Heaven and Hell, and he would almost literally annihilate all of the billion-plus Predators with a thought.

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it's not on earth it's on another planet, they rebooted predator with milatary, prisoners, and threats that the predators wanted to hunt for practice on invasions and spawn was chosen as a threat

 

Eh, that's not really made clear here. The descriptions just make this sound like somewhere on Earth to me.

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Match Final Results

USER RATINGS

DSkillz gives it a grade of: D Grammar and dialogue has improved, but the story and settings don't make much sense, and the matchup's a stomp either way.

SCORE

Spawn: 12

Predator: 5

FPA: 1.0

 

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