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Battlesphere Battle Royal Part 9 Match 17107 Chloe Bourgeois vs. Roxy Rocket vs. Red Claw

MATCH SCORE
Chloe Bourgeois: 3
Roxy Rocket: 2
Red Claw: 1

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11:7 - Master Shifu vs. Ted Lasso

MATCH SCORE
Master Shifu: 6
Ted Lasso: 4

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11:7 - Apollo Creed vs. Zordon of Eltar

MATCH SCORE
Apollo Creed: 6
Zordon of Eltar: 7

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11:7 - Mercy (Overwatch) vs. The Holographic Doctor

MATCH SCORE
Mercy (Overwatch): 3
The Holographic Doctor: 8

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11:7 - Middle-Earth vs. Mini-Me

MATCH SCORE
Middle-Earth: 3
Mini-Me: 9

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11:7 - Mickey Goodmill vs. Phil (Disney)

MATCH SCORE
Mickey Goodmill: 8
Phil (Disney): 3

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11:7 - Ethan Hunt vs. Carmen Sandiego

MATCH SCORE
Ethan Hunt: 2
Carmen Sandiego: 10

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11:7 - Iroh vs. Sgt. Slaughter

MATCH SCORE
Iroh: 5
Sgt. Slaughter: 7

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11:7 - Ratchet vs. Julian Bashir

MATCH SCORE
Ratchet: 4
Julian Bashir: 6

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11:7 - President Thomas J. Whitmore vs. Master Roshi

MATCH SCORE
President Thomas J. Whitmore: 8
Master Roshi: 2

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11:7 - Raccoon City vs. Bob (Agent of Hydra)

MATCH SCORE
Raccoon City: 7
Bob (Agent of Hydra): 4

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11:7 - Hoth vs. Marco Diaz

MATCH SCORE
Hoth: 8
Marco Diaz: 1

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11:7 - Amy Wong vs. Westview, New Jersey

MATCH SCORE
Amy Wong: 8
Westview, New Jersey: 2

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11:7 - Rafiki vs. Gouken

MATCH SCORE
Rafiki: 6
Gouken: 3

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11:7 - The Town of Silent Hill vs. Genie (Disney)

MATCH SCORE
The Town of Silent Hill: 2
Genie (Disney): 7

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11:7 - Sasuke (Ganbare Goemon) vs. Genji

MATCH SCORE
Sasuke (Ganbare Goemon): 1
Genji: 7

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11:7 - Kato vs. The Cube

MATCH SCORE
Kato: 4
The Cube: 6

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11:7 - Dr. Gregory House vs. Bones McCoy

MATCH SCORE
Dr. Gregory House: 4
Bones McCoy: 6

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11:7 - Vanellope Von Schweetz vs. Princess Calla

MATCH SCORE
Vanellope Von Schweetz: 9
Princess Calla: 3

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Tournament - The Kraken (Clash of the Titans) vs. Midgard Serpent

MATCH SCORE
The Kraken (Clash of the Titans): 2
Midgard Serpent: 3

Match 13152 The Avengers and Justice League vs. The 2012 Apocalypse


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Sorry, couldn't resist.

 

I have a few questions before answering this.

 

1. How big is Nibiru? (The linked article says possibly as big as Jupiter but it doesn't say whether it means in mass or volume.)

2. Is Nibiru a terrestrial (solid) planet or a gas giant like Jupiter.

3. Is Nibiru inhabited by an advanced race of aliens as some conspiracy theorists believe. If so, do they have technology that could help or hinder the heroes and what are their intentions?

4. What version of the characters are we dealing with here? If this is the Silver Age JLA, this is a lot easier to figure out.

 

I would want to resassign the Hulk. He will not be very helpful in rescuing civilians and has saved the earth from a collision event before.

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There's barely any story, and what's there is so badly written that it might as well be non-existent, there is no characterization to speak off, and considering the power shared on team one, it's a massive stomp match in their favor, even considering the fairly large error you've made in placing the Nibiru planet only a few miles away from earth.

 

Also, your general attitude when presented with valid yet polite critique of your grammar, drags the rating down.

 

All in all, I'm giving this an F rating, and I'd urge you to either stick with rumbles, or vastly improve your writing skills if you plan on making more actual matches.

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From the effort and detail put in the match this is at best a rumble. Try adding more substance to your set-ups in the future. Outside of that the choice of putting the Planet miles away from Earth is probably a mistake, as that would mean it should hit earth in less than a few second giving team 1 no time to react

 

That being said... Silver-Age Superman can still save the day

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Just noticed this edit.

 

edit: please delete this post now!

 

My answer to this? Uh uh.

 

I think I'll explain why after Christmas.

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As promised, I'm back.

 

I'm not going to delete this match, because, simply, we can't go around deleting matches every time someone doesn't want to hear some light criticism. Content on this site is only edited, closed, etc. if it becomes disruptive to the site as a whole for some reason (i.e., the content is or starts a troll/flame fest, is an ad, plagiarizes someone else's work, etc.). Besides, Fox has made it known that he'd rather the mod team not outright delete official matches. There are other ways to deal with them.

 

It's true that a point of this site is to have fun, but another point of this site is to improve your writing (which you can have fun doing, too). So, in short, as mentioned, if you don't want to hear critiques like seen here or worse, either work to improve your match writing or it might be best for you to stick to the rumbles.

 

Don't bow to his wishes, or we might end up breeding another anu or redemtion x. :P

 

Heh, I've never seen anyone here bow to them. And that wouldn't stop their whining anyway. :D

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