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#21 Nilan

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 02:03 PM

Lee Chong by Stranglehold Prime reads like a "How To" for blowing standard level powers to epic proportions.

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 09:40 AM

I am actally glad my God character has been erased. Because that was my worst character I created and I didnt know to much about FPL.

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Posted 10 December 2010 - 03:56 PM

Red Blade, by Vallian. We're looser on the short descriptions, but "it's Judo" is just too damn short. At least two sentences, please.

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Posted 13 December 2010 - 09:06 AM

Red Blade, by Vallian. We're looser on the short descriptions, but "it's Judo" is just too damn short. At least two sentences, please.


Might I suggest: "It's Judo. Really, it is!"

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Posted 18 December 2010 - 12:57 AM

Blocked and Disabled The Element by brainiac123

My Reason? Power descriptions so awful, they have to be seen to be believed, offenses include:

Claiming the wrong power
Description for Standard Eldritch Blast: The power to control all special elements such as electricity and magnetism. Telekinesis is also included.

Claiming the wrong level
Description for Standard Mind Control: The ability to use people as puppets to do his bidding. Can control 10 people at once easily. 20 max.

All of the above
Description for Standard Sonics: The ability to create a sonic black hole. Being super advanced magic, largest black hole possible for The Element would devour a small city.

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Posted 22 December 2010 - 07:18 PM

do you get a certain prize if you manage to overstate all your powers to ultimate?
http://www.electricf...ts/show?cid=219
Cool pic though,

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Posted 22 December 2010 - 10:11 PM

Disabled character Entity by user chaostheory

Improper power descriptions. The Entity has no power here.

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Posted 23 December 2010 - 07:10 PM

Thornaan's image is that of a Marvel Comics character.

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Posted 23 December 2010 - 07:26 PM

Images are not of our concern, namely we aren't claiming the images. They're just a representation. The picture doesn't matter, it's the character that does.

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Posted 23 December 2010 - 07:50 PM

Images are not of our concern, namely we aren't claiming the images. They're just a representation. The picture doesn't matter, it's the character that does.

Ah.

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Posted 26 December 2010 - 09:23 PM

I'm almost certain that Chaostheory decided to use a little of the old Plagiarism for his newest creation, Zeryn Faross: http://www.electricf...ts/show?cid=220. Seeing as how he's had a few ToSS'd characters already and his last character was Talon: http://www.electricf...ats/show?cid=81 . That is one dramatic improvement in skills. It also helped that I looked up one word in his character (Nemtorian) and was brought to this lovely little Google treat, which features a story about a fallen angel and happens to have the exact same sentence ("The heavens thundered as he appeared in the Nemtorian winter sky. He could feel his falling velocity increase as the flames of divine judgement scorched his") from Chaostheory's story.: http://www.google.co...z...rian&nfpr=1

Never would I have been brought to the attention of this character if the author himself Mr. Theory didn't request for Zeryn to be a member of the Children Of Sayang. As I've told previous CBUBers before. Be careful what you wish for.

So, unless Chaostheory is really Mr. Kevin R. Wiener who creates nice Elfwood fictions and forgot how to write up until this glorious epic, then...ToSS a comin'. Anybody agree?

P.S. There is a reason Mr. Green calls me Detective-Sama.

Getting really sick of the Shenanigans people.

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Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:00 PM

treach do you need that char Tossed? (I can do it, but maybe you can too, I don't know what your permissions are set to.)

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Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:13 PM

It's like they're trying to get smarter or something...

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Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:18 PM

I don't need anything. I just like to gloat like a supervillain.

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Posted 27 December 2010 - 08:02 PM

All characters created by 100years and Brainiac123 have been deleted and ToSSed due to multi-accounting.

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Posted 27 December 2010 - 08:30 PM

All characters created by 100years and Brainiac123 have been deleted and ToSSed due to multi-accounting.

Wow, go Treach.
Is the mighty ban-hammer being raised for this offense?

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Posted 28 December 2010 - 12:24 PM

Split and moved the argument. You don't hijack official threads.

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Posted 28 December 2010 - 04:35 PM

Yeah...sorry about that.

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Posted 31 December 2010 - 12:06 PM

Newton seems to have two overstated powers, if I'm not mistaken.

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 03:38 AM

Started going through the list and came up with some suggestions. We got a few cellar-dwellers who could easily be put out of their misery. Some of these are overly technical but after records like 0:25, I think we can be more rigid with the rulings on these guys, time to get anal-retentive.

Bloodhound
-Claims powers not taken: Description of non-existent guns in marksman

Psychoman
-Overstates powers: Like all of them, standard tk able to lift tons, etc

Huffrin
-Overstates powers: super fast Flight, over stated standard Reflection, pretty much all of them except duplication

Gravix
-Overstates powers: Super speed equals sprinting at 200 mph, and standard teleportation = hundreds of miles

Cnut the Great
Claims wrong power: Commander is used like tactician

Newton
What Jason said, forcefield overstated, gravity overstated.

Noriester
Overstates power/ claims power not taken: Weather control goes waay beyond superior (750 mile winds) and begins to move into energy manipulation territory with the whole wind dragon thing...

Entellijan: Below acceptable rate of quality

Nok: Below acceptable rate of quality

VARD 03: Overstates powers: Standard martial arts= knowledge of all martial arts everywhere?, standard super-speed taken as sprinting 200 miles per hour, standard body armor as “impervious” titanium skin

Aaron Taylor: Claims powers not taken: Marksmen claims guns not purchased

The Angel of Darkness: Claims powers not taken: energy absorption claims some sort of energy attack it feeds into which was never bought

The Disingrator: Below acceptable rate of quality, overstates decay power

Killa 5000
Overstates powers: eldritch energy claims super area effect (Killing all humans within an entire mile)

Bishop: Claims powers not taken: Implies a battle axe in weapon master when no axe was taken

Lee Chong: Overstates powers: Martial arts overstates strength, standard Super-speed claims he can run 100 miles in 5 seconds (roughly 72,000 mph), Piercing weapon claims skill with weapon not taken, super ranged not taken, ranged not taken (in fact it isn’t even a gun at this point, let alone a sniper rifle), standard slashing weapon overstated to cut through steel and decapitate people “like butter”.

The Colonel: Claims wrong power: Weapons master used like marksmanship

The Black Arachnid: Claims wrong power: Concussive is described as some sort of mix between poison and electricity, not a boom. Claims powers not taken: Claims commander in tactician and in Environmental awareness




Borderline

Dark Stryder
-Claims wrong power: Healing is actually regeneration (Overly technical, I know, but its not like the kill-floor will really miss him)

Astoreth the Dead: Overstates power: Mind control

Eneron: Overstates power: Standard Force field able to stop a train?

Awesome man: Below acceptable rate of quality, overstates superior body armor

Syko: Overstates Illusion power, and probably close to below acceptable rate of quality




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