The Thread of Supreme Shame
Posted 29 October 2010 - 02:03 PM
Posted 30 October 2010 - 09:40 AM
Posted 10 December 2010 - 03:56 PM
Posted 13 December 2010 - 09:06 AM
Red Blade, by Vallian. We're looser on the short descriptions, but "it's Judo" is just too damn short. At least two sentences, please.
Might I suggest: "It's Judo. Really, it is!"
Posted 18 December 2010 - 12:57 AM
My Reason? Power descriptions so awful, they have to be seen to be believed, offenses include:
Claiming the wrong power
Description for Standard Eldritch Blast: The power to control all special elements such as electricity and magnetism. Telekinesis is also included.
Claiming the wrong level
Description for Standard Mind Control: The ability to use people as puppets to do his bidding. Can control 10 people at once easily. 20 max.
All of the above
Description for Standard Sonics: The ability to create a sonic black hole. Being super advanced magic, largest black hole possible for The Element would devour a small city.
Posted 22 December 2010 - 10:11 PM
Improper power descriptions. The Entity has no power here.
Posted 23 December 2010 - 07:26 PM
Posted 23 December 2010 - 07:50 PM
Images are not of our concern, namely we aren't claiming the images. They're just a representation. The picture doesn't matter, it's the character that does.
Posted 26 December 2010 - 09:23 PM
Never would I have been brought to the attention of this character if the author himself Mr. Theory didn't request for Zeryn to be a member of the Children Of Sayang. As I've told previous CBUBers before. Be careful what you wish for.
So, unless Chaostheory is really Mr. Kevin R. Wiener who creates nice Elfwood fictions and forgot how to write up until this glorious epic, then...ToSS a comin'. Anybody agree?
P.S. There is a reason Mr. Green calls me Detective-Sama.
Getting really sick of the Shenanigans people.
Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:00 PM
Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:13 PM
Posted 26 December 2010 - 10:18 PM
Posted 27 December 2010 - 08:02 PM
Posted 27 December 2010 - 08:30 PM
Wow, go Treach.
All characters created by 100years and Brainiac123 have been deleted and ToSSed due to multi-accounting.
Is the mighty ban-hammer being raised for this offense?
Posted 28 December 2010 - 12:24 PM
Posted 03 January 2011 - 03:38 AM
-Claims powers not taken: Description of non-existent guns in marksman
-Overstates powers: Like all of them, standard tk able to lift tons, etc
-Overstates powers: super fast Flight, over stated standard Reflection, pretty much all of them except duplication
-Overstates powers: Super speed equals sprinting at 200 mph, and standard teleportation = hundreds of miles
Cnut the Great
Claims wrong power: Commander is used like tactician
What Jason said, forcefield overstated, gravity overstated.
Overstates power/ claims power not taken: Weather control goes waay beyond superior (750 mile winds) and begins to move into energy manipulation territory with the whole wind dragon thing...
Entellijan: Below acceptable rate of quality
Nok: Below acceptable rate of quality
VARD 03: Overstates powers: Standard martial arts= knowledge of all martial arts everywhere?, standard super-speed taken as sprinting 200 miles per hour, standard body armor as “impervious” titanium skin
Aaron Taylor: Claims powers not taken: Marksmen claims guns not purchased
The Angel of Darkness: Claims powers not taken: energy absorption claims some sort of energy attack it feeds into which was never bought
The Disingrator: Below acceptable rate of quality, overstates decay power
Overstates powers: eldritch energy claims super area effect (Killing all humans within an entire mile)
Bishop: Claims powers not taken: Implies a battle axe in weapon master when no axe was taken
Lee Chong: Overstates powers: Martial arts overstates strength, standard Super-speed claims he can run 100 miles in 5 seconds (roughly 72,000 mph), Piercing weapon claims skill with weapon not taken, super ranged not taken, ranged not taken (in fact it isn’t even a gun at this point, let alone a sniper rifle), standard slashing weapon overstated to cut through steel and decapitate people “like butter”.
The Colonel: Claims wrong power: Weapons master used like marksmanship
The Black Arachnid: Claims wrong power: Concussive is described as some sort of mix between poison and electricity, not a boom. Claims powers not taken: Claims commander in tactician and in Environmental awareness
-Claims wrong power: Healing is actually regeneration (Overly technical, I know, but its not like the kill-floor will really miss him)
Astoreth the Dead: Overstates power: Mind control
Eneron: Overstates power: Standard Force field able to stop a train?
Awesome man: Below acceptable rate of quality, overstates superior body armor
Syko: Overstates Illusion power, and probably close to below acceptable rate of quality
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