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Match 14376 The Punisher vs. J and K, the Men in Black

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#1 E-Rock

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 12:21 AM

War Journal Entry #420-

A string of kidnappings has me on the hunt. These disgusting perverts are the lowest forms of scum I deal with and they must be dealt with quickly before they can continue they're terror.

I gathered the intel I needed and tracked down my target. I can't decide what i want to kill this piece of shit with yet so I leave myself with some options. I lock and load with an M-16, a pistol grip 12-gage, a Dessert Eagle, a couple Flashbangs and a Knife.Quietly making my way up to the house i sneak through an window after checking the door to find it locked. Once I am inside the perverts house i notice the basement light is on. I proceed down the basement and am greeted with a menacing but expected sight....Blood.....Bones. But what i see next has me baffled.

As i get toward the bottom of the stairs I see a strange gray substance. I enter the basebent and at my feet is a massive creature that looks out of this world with a hole the size of bowling ball blasted out of his stomach. A little girl is crying in the corner but she is not the only one in the room.

Standing in the middle of the room are two men. The one on the left, the younger of the two and black. The one on the right, an older white man. Both men wore black suits and black ties. And both had biggest, most bizzare guns i have ever seen in my life!

I knew there was no time for questions. I ready my weapons and prepare for battle!



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Posted 27 June 2013 - 12:21 AM

Learn More About
The Punisher
Read more about The Punisher at Wikipedia
Official Site: Marvel Comics Links: The Punisher's Wikipedia page IMDB Punisher The Punisher Archives

J and K, the Men in Black
Read more about J and K, the Men in Black at Wikipedia
Official Site: Sony Pictures Links: Wikipedia "Men in Black" page imdb "Men in Black" page "Men in Black II" official page



#3 skadoosh

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 08:25 AM

Punisher is more skilled, but the MIB have much better tech and weapons, making this a pretty tough match. I'll have to wait and see what others say.



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Posted 27 June 2013 - 08:44 AM

MIB should win this. Is this comic punisher?

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Posted 28 June 2013 - 11:01 AM

If it's film Punisher then he definitely loses. The comic book version has a very good chance of winning, though.



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Posted 28 June 2013 - 11:39 AM

The fight is a tough call. Despite their more powerful weapons, J and K may be in trouble. Their best bet is to neuralize him as he won't know not to look.

 

It's a good idea for a match and I like the idea of using the Punisher's war journal as a framing device. He is slightly out of character, attacking the agents with no idea whether they're the abductors or the girl's rescuers. There are also a few grammar errors and several typos. My favorite is the Dessert Eagle, which I'm guessing is a gun that shoots pies. :D



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Posted 29 June 2013 - 11:07 PM

This is decent for a return match, E-Rock. The story here has some potential. Still, as mentioned, Frank is kind of out of character here. He wouldn't just attack J and K out of the blue, and possibly not at all if he were to find out what they're about. Also, the match could've used some line spacing and proofreading.

 

If they were to fight for real, the Punisher would give the agents a hell of a time, though I'd imagine K would give Frank a tough time, too, with his own experience. 



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Posted 30 June 2013 - 03:52 PM

Yea I agree kind of out of character but I figured thats the only way they would end up fighting

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Posted 02 July 2013 - 12:23 AM

Yeah, K's experience over the years will give Frank a run for his money and add in a trigger happy rookie after a hard fight, they'd win.  But if this is Comic Punisher then Comic J and K (from Marvel) should be used too.



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Posted 02 July 2013 - 06:15 AM

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
Dinsdale Piranha gives it a grade of: B Good match but it needs more proofreading.
Confession FPT gives it a grade of: B Sorta short, but not bad.
DSkillz gives it a grade of: C Story has potential, but as mentioned, the Punisher is a bit out of character, and the match itself could've used some line spacing and proofreading.
SCORE
The Punisher: 8
J and K, the Men in Black: 6
FPA: 2.7






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