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Match 14287 The Infected vs. Officer Rick Grimes


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#1 Austo191

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Posted 21 June 2013 - 04:51 PM

Rick and his son, Carl, were all that was left. Once the prison was over run,  they had nothing else to do. They both knew that hope for a cure was foolish. They only had one goal now. 
 
And it is to simply survive ... To find others.
 
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The two eventually found their way to, what appeared to be, an adavanced Medical Center. Rick remembered the last place like this he entered.
 
He quickly reassured himself that whatever's in there can't be as bad as what's out here. He told Carl to draw his gun, and they moved inside.
 
The place was dark. And there appeared to be no survivors. The two started to search the facility to find anything that might help them.
 
That's when Carl stumbled upon a tape recorder. Next to it was a small puddle of blood. Carl quietly called Rick over to examine it.
 
"Do I play it?" Carl asked, tape recorder still in hand.
 
Rick began to wonder whether he cared what it said or not. "Just play it, son." Rick decided. 
 
********
 
"This is Dr. Richard Stovall ... This will be my final entry."
 
"We thought we found a cure. Everything was running so smoothly. Not only did it CURE this 'phenomena', it also healed the wounds ... even the more devastating ones."
 
"Unfortunately, the effects only lasted a short while. It appears instead of curing whatever this is, we only made it more ferocious. These things were not only faster than what they were before ... they were stronger ... And in a way, smarter."
 
"At the moment these 'things' are banging on the door. Patient Zero qucikly infected the rest of the staff ... I'm all that's left."
 
"They'll be in here soon ... If anyone finds this ... Please ... Get away ... Get away as quickly as you can ..."
 
There's a loud cracking sound in the background, followed by hissing. The Doctor screamed and the tape abruptly ended.
 
********
 
Rick looked at his son.
 
"We should probably get out of here then." 
 
Carl nodded. 
 
As they were about to pack up what they could and get out, they heard a hissing. The same as what they heard in the recording. Before they could react one of these 'infected' charged Rick.
 
"Dad!" Carl yelled.
 
"I ... got this!" Rick grunted.
 
Rick jammed the crowbar he had through its eye, and brought it to the ground. He yanked the crowbar out of its face. The thing still twitched a bit. 
 
This hadn't happened before. Usually after one blow to the brain, these things usually died. As in, didn't get up again. Rick jammed the crowbar in its face again, this time effectively killing it.
 
Rick turned around to see Carl was missing. 
 
"Carl? Carl!?" Rick cried out. "No, no, no, no. He was just here!"
 
More hissing noises were heard. Rick checked his gun. Fully loaded. "He couldn't have gone far ... I'll find him."
 
***************
 
Rick Grimes in a large Medical Facility full of 28 Day Later Infected people. H
His goal here is to find Carl, and take out as many of things as he can trying. 
Will Rick be able to find him or will the Infected get to him first.


#2 Callisto

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Posted 21 June 2013 - 04:51 PM

Learn More About
The Infected
Read more about The Infected at Wikipedia
Official Site: Fox Searchlight Pictures Links: 28 Days Later Wikipedia page 28 Days Later imdb page 28 Days Later official site

Officer Rick Grimes
Read more about Officer Rick Grimes at Wikipedia
Official Site: Image Comics Links: The Walking Dead Wiki Entry IGN Review/Partial Summary About.com Partial Summary



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Posted 26 June 2013 - 03:38 PM

Hmm... maybe the Fantasy matches took some attention from this one. This is good, Austo, but could've been condensed into more paragraphs. 

 

As for the match, it would likely depend on how far the Infected got away with Carl and how soon they decide to try to take a bite of the boy. Rick, though, seems pretty experienced at this type of thing, and it appears that the Infected only have a few moments headstart on him. Rick can probably save his son, but he'll likely have to find him quickly.



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Posted 26 June 2013 - 06:15 PM

Match Final Results
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DSkillz gives it a grade of: B Pretty good story, but it could've been condensed into paragraphs and maybe could've been a bit longer.
SCORE
The Infected: 1
Officer Rick Grimes: 9
FPA: 3.0





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