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Match 14130 Nero vs. Grand Moff Tarkin


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#1 rob39874

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Posted 12 June 2013 - 09:24 AM

General Moff Tarkin sat gazing out window of the star destroyer outside was some kind of electromagnetic storm and something seemed to be coming through it.

General Tarkin has never seen anything like it.

"Sir we are being fired upon" yelled the guy on radar. 

General Tarkin went straight into action

"Battle Station scramble the Tie Fighters" he said.

Almost immediately the tie fighters could be seen and Grand master Tarkin was astounded when almost as quickly he saw them exploding due to some kind of torpedo that seemed to strike multiple targets at once. The ship was not completley out of the storm.

"There hailing us" the comms officer said 

"My name is Nero I will spare your life if you tell me where I can find Ambassador Spock" 

"I don;t know this ambassador spock" Tarkin replied

"Unfortunate for you" Nero said and terminated the channel

Tarkin saw the ship come closer.

"Open Fire" Tarkin said "In the name of Empire"



#2 Callisto

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Posted 12 June 2013 - 09:24 AM

Learn More About
Nero
Read more about Nero at Wikipedia
Official Site: Paramount Pictures Links: Wikipedia Nero-Memory Alpha IMBD

Grand Moff Tarkin
Read more about Grand Moff Tarkin at Wikipedia
Official Site: 20th Century Fox Films Links: Tarkin Wikipedia page Tarkin StarWars.com page StarWars.com



#3 Dinsdale Piranha

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Posted 12 June 2013 - 10:19 AM

Nero's ship (IIRC) was a retooled mining vessel. He did well against Starfleet because his technology was a century ahead of theirs. I'd tend to say Tarkin on that basis.

 

Besides, he's not just a Moff, he's a Grand Moff!



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Posted 12 June 2013 - 11:18 AM

What kind of ship is Grand Moff Tarkin leading? If it's the Death Star, well...Nero will witness the full power of this fully armed and operational battle station.



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Posted 12 June 2013 - 11:54 AM

Neros ships is a mining vessel fitted with Borg technology and Moffs ship is a standard star cruiser and since star wars is in a long time a go ina galazy far far away nero has it with the more advanced technology IMO 



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Posted 12 June 2013 - 12:25 PM

what  ship is Tarkin commanding?



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Posted 12 June 2013 - 02:33 PM

Neros ships is a mining vessel fitted with Borg technology and Moffs ship is a standard star cruiser and since star wars is in a long time a go ina galazy far far away nero has it with the more advanced technology IMO 

 

I'll agree with that. Nero wins.



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Posted 15 June 2013 - 12:34 AM

Welcome to electricferret, rob39874. Hope you enjoy your stay.

 

It's good that you wrote out a story for your first CBUB match. For you next match, though, it may be easier for the reader to read if you broke the story into paragraphs. 

 

I'm not really familiar with these characters, though, so I can't say who would win here.



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Posted 15 June 2013 - 12:46 AM

I think the star destroyer wins but what kinda Borg upgrades did he have?

Not a bad setup if this is your first one. Just be warned this can be a tough crowd. The more detailed the story is the higher your rating will be. Also grammar count so I hope you played attention in that 5th grade English class. I know I didn't. If you are not worried about your ranking just make it a rumble and you won't get scored on it. Welcome to the CBUB.

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Posted 17 June 2013 - 10:15 AM

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
Dinsdale Piranha gives it a grade of: A
leroypowell3 gives it a grade of: C
DSkillz gives it a grade of: C There's a decent story here, but spacing and punctuation would make this a bit easier to read.
SCORE
Nero: 12
Grand Moff Tarkin: 7
FPA: 2.7





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