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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:28 AM
Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:48 AM
I made a new character. He is not the best I can do granted I been up all day working but I decided to create him I have put a days worth of thought into him. and after hearing all of the comments about my writing I decided to make a change. I am not going to utalize things I learned about in english class. These are ideas I have brought to life, I am not supposed to describe what These characters do I am supposed to show who they are. I need to "become" them since they came from me, in essence they are part of me. I will base their story through their eyes. I learned this in theater. I do not just through the charater out there I become one with the character. this may sound weird make fun of me all you want.
Posted 22 May 2013 - 10:04 AM
I am not going to utalize things I learned about in english class.
Well, to be fair, the point of the Website is actually to attempt to be a fun way to help people learn to write better. Just sayin'.
Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:02 PM
But if you hadn't read the nitty gritty FPL guide then you should.
Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:10 PM
What you just said helps you understand the motivations behind your characters, but you also need to use the writing techniques you've learned elsewhere to effectively communicate those motivations in a written format. You might get the motivation behind your characters, but you need to utilize the writing skills you've learned in English classes and the like to help others understand what you already understand.
Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:23 PM
We aren't trying to gang up on you or force you to do anything. We're just giving some friendly advice. Do as you please.
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