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Match 8540 Wultar, Wolf Warrior of Earth vs. Rylie Hunter


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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:28 AM

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#2 Callisto

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:28 AM

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Wultar, Wolf Warrior of Earth
Origination: Physical
Alignment: Hero
Team: The Sentinels of Liberty and Justice

Rylie Hunter
Origination: Physical
Alignment: Villain
Team: The Wicked Garden




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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:48 AM

I made a new character. He is not the best I can do granted I been up all day working but I decided to create him I have put a days worth of thought into him. and after hearing all of the comments about my writing I decided to make a change. I am not going to utalize things I learned about in english class. These are ideas I have brought to life, I am not supposed to describe what These characters do I am supposed to show who they are. I need to "become" them since they came from me, in essence they are part of me. I will base their story through their eyes. I learned this in theater. I do not just through the charater out there I become one with the character. this may sound weird make fun of me all you want.



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Posted 22 May 2013 - 10:04 AM

I am not going to utalize things I learned about in english class.

 

Well, to be fair, the point of the Website is actually to attempt to be a fun way to help people learn to write better.  Just sayin'.



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Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:02 PM

I don't even know what you're taking about?

But if you hadn't read the nitty gritty FPL guide then you should.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:10 PM

It's cool to use the stuff you've learned in Theater, but if you said this to one of your Theater teachers they'd tell you that Theater and Literature are related disciplines that play off of one another.

What you just said helps you understand the motivations behind your characters, but you also need to use the writing techniques you've learned elsewhere to effectively communicate those motivations in a written format. You might get the motivation behind your characters, but you need to utilize the writing skills you've learned in English classes and the like to help others understand what you already understand.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:23 PM

And just to make things clear here:

We aren't trying to gang up on you or force you to do anything. We're just giving some friendly advice. Do as you please.

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Posted 27 May 2013 - 05:01 AM

Match Final Results
Rylie Hunter Won a match against Wultar, Wolf Warrior of Earth
9 to 4
Wultar, Wolf Warrior of Earth: -25 fame points
Rylie Hunter: 25 fame points





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