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Match 8530 Vlad, the Handsome Privateer vs. Mr.Styx


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 08:02 AM

Vlad is patorling the waters of Khazan. he has heard strange reports of a creepy raven man who has killed a few people.

 

Vlad: Man oh man I wish these guys were easier to find.

Vlad recived leads of a handsome man with red eyes has been spotted in the ally of a small village, Vlad checks with the locals who one gave me the slip this guys is where ravens are.

 

Vlad: Ravens? oh darn. This guy is such a crab person.

 

Vlad heads towards a creepy mansion where some ravens are roosting when a creepy laugh that sends chills down vlads spine...

 

Mr.Styx: so you are one of those Angels of mercy clowns? I expected someone less..... Girly.

 

Vlad: well I expected someone less creepy! and you smell like road kill!

Mr. Styx:  Keep your civl touge in your head girly man!

Vlad draws his cutlass and his pistol.

Vlad: I am going to snap your neck and feed you to the crabs!

Mr. Styx laughs his creepy laugh, this time Vlad is determanied to bring this guy down.



#2 Callisto

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 08:02 AM

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Vlad, the Handsome Privateer
Origination: Physical
Alignment: Hero
Team: The Angels of Mercy

Mr.Styx
Origination: Eldritch
Alignment: Villain
Team: The Syndicate




#3 MikeEB

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 01:21 PM

Your match description is a better personality section than your character's personality section.  You should have put more effort into the character sheet.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:40 PM

Well I am rather new to this. but I notice people put a story not a description on their character Bio. so I am going to do what I was taught to do and follow the insturcions submitted.



#5 MikeEB

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 04:03 PM

Well I am rather new to this. but I notice people put a story not a description on their character Bio. so I am going to do what I was taught to do and follow the insturcions submitted.

If you're new to FPL, the first thing you should do is post a character draft to the Charactre Analysis forum, collect advice and follow it.  And yeah, narrative power descriptions mostly dominate declarative ones in the current FPL; voters don't like reading about what the powers do, they like reading about the powers being used.



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Posted 25 May 2013 - 11:01 AM

Match Final Results
Mr.Styx Won a match against Vlad, the Handsome Privateer
12 to 2
Overpowering Win ... Brutal Loss: Fame points doubled!
Vlad, the Handsome Privateer: -50 fame points
Mr.Styx: 50 fame points





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