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#1 Pseudonym

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 10:31 AM

http://www.electricf...ts/show?cid=642

 

The shorter character paradigm really helped me out in making this one. It's not a style I'm really used to though, so I would like some feedback, especially from Landon or Updatedude or The Rookie. Those guys who've been around for a bit longer'n I have.



#2 Landon

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 01:43 PM

Not much to say other than she looks pretty solid. You get the point across in a fairly brief and breezy way. 

Do more with her in fic stuff.



#3 treacherous

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 03:55 PM

That was quick! Well nobody can say Pseudonym is afraid to step into unfamiliar territory.




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