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Match 8507 Niko Beoir vs. Dayshift Sentinel Zachery Parke


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#1 Nihlium

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:33 PM

Kingsport, Khazan (1:00 Am)

 

 Albtraum watched as Niko's men carried the last large crate into the unmarked cargo ship "Can I ask you a question Niko?"

 

"Sure." answered Niko as he sipped the contents of a silver flask.

 

"Where did you get all this from?"

 

"Here and there." replied Niko dismissively.

 

Albtraum turned to Niko and frowned "Niko, what am I getting myself into here?" 

 

Niko emptied the bottle and sighed "From the SLJ."

 

"WHERE!? Have you lost your mind?" exclaimed Albtraum wincing as his voice echoed around the dock.

 

"Don't worry Lex. The SLJ busy getting their asses handed to them. By the time they realize it'll be too late." a light flickered on the cargo ship and Niko put his hand on Albtraum's shoulder

 

"Well bud, that's you. I'll call you when I'm finished here."

Niko bumped fists with his old friend and started  to leave the dock when an icicle landed at his feet "Son of bitch."

 

"Did you really think you'd get away that easily?" announced Zachery as he stepped out of the shadows.

Niko sucked down the contents of his flask and crushed it "What the hell are wearing kid? I know the SLJ is in trouble but this is ridiculous."

 

"Shut up!" shouted Zachery as he fired three more icicles "Tell me where that ship is going or I'll beat it out of you."

 

Niko opened and emptied a glass flask and threw it on the ground sending glittering splinters across the floor "Be my guest kid."



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:33 PM

Learn More About
Niko Beoir
Origination: Super
Alignment: Villain
Team: The Syndicate

Dayshift Sentinel Zachery Parke
Origination: Divine
Alignment: Hero
Team: The Sentinels of Liberty and Justice




#3 Nihlium

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:38 PM

This is my first write up for a match so some critique would be nice.



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 01:14 AM

Good set-up.  Sets the scene well, I think.

 

And also... Woot!  somebody finally made a match!



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 09:33 AM

I think the reality that the stakes are higher has set in. Nobody wants to risk their characters demise. I'll throw something together soon. Anybody want to see a match (set-up) with one of my guy's vs anybody? I'm not particular in who it's against.

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 09:35 AM

Also, decent enough set-up. Like a video game cut scene.

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Posted 16 May 2013 - 05:01 AM

Match Final Results
Niko Beoir Won a match against Dayshift Sentinel Zachery Parke
7 to 6
Niko Beoir: 25 fame points
Dayshift Sentinel Zachery Parke: -25 fame points


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Posted 16 May 2013 - 12:23 PM

Wow, it's surprising to see a character who's starred in a buncha fics get laid low by a newcomer.



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Posted 16 May 2013 - 12:40 PM

1) I haven't seen any such fics recently.

2) This is the FPL.  Match results are chaotic. Surprises are standard.



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Posted 16 May 2013 - 01:33 PM

1) I haven't seen any such fics recently.

2) This is the FPL.  Match results are chaotic. Surprises are standard.

 1.) Look Harder.

 

 2.) This is true.



#11 Nihlium

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Posted 16 May 2013 - 02:00 PM

Phew! I was kinda worried for awhile. Niko is now my top character with three wins.



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Posted 17 May 2013 - 12:27 PM

Yesss. Read Rise of the Fallen.

 

But seriously, his whole character really leans on these fics and the Academy fic.






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