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Microfic: Annihilator vs Hazel Vines


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#1 MikeEB

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 03:55 PM

Annihilator didn't even touch the door; he tore it off its hinges with telekinesis as he walked in.  When he scanned the nearby minds for Blackwood, he noticed a woman thinking about her gun.

 

"Shoot yourself".

 

He heard a gunshot and a cry of pain behind him as he hurried through the waiting room.  Chairs flew as he passed, dumping their occupants and then clubbing them.  Then a second shot went off.  A burst of pain rattled his chest.  He turned and saw the same woman, crouching and aiming.

 

"How?" he gasped.

 

Hazel shifted more weight off her injured leg as she pulled the trigger.

 

"You didn't say where."



#2 Bergy_Berg

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:12 PM

This is probably the most micro a fic could be.



#3 Nihlium

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:22 PM

This is probably the most micro a fic could be.

 

Imagine if he wrote a haiku.



#4 Darkender

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:51 PM

I was assuming there'd be more... Write more.



#5 MikeEB

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 06:22 PM

I don't see any reason to draw the story out more than necessary.  But since you insisted, I removed another ten words.

 

(Besides, this is a better description of Annihilator's powers than the one on his character sheet)






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