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Match 13645 Spider-Man vs. Mary Jane Watson-Parker vs. Spider-Girl

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#21 Dark Spider-man

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 01:41 PM

Good set-up and pretty good Challenge entry, Dark S-M. What happened with your improvement on your tenses, though, man? Since you've entered this in the Challenge, you may want to correct some things here, and maybe even after voting wraps. I don't think the judges don't really look at the entries until the deadline.

As for the match, as mentioned, Pete's going to be distraught with the prospects of having to kill his own daughter and fighting his own wife, but he's managed to figure out ways to contain worse threats as opposed to killing them. Still, it's going to be tough for him to do so when both May and Mary Jane may briefly team up against him. Between Mary Jane struggling for control with the symbiote and feral instincts taking over in May, though, such a team-up won't last long, so Spidey just might get the brief opportunity he needs to incapacitate at least one of them, and then deal with the other. He's going to take a lot of punishment in the meantime, though.


Haha, I actually wrote this at work during my break. And I sadly don't have time to edit it. To busy with work and such.

#22 Dark Spider-man

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 01:42 PM

Spidey is the type to get all conflicted in a fight, so it is unlikely he'll be dead set on anything other than getting venom off MJ, which he can do without hurting her. I had also completely skipped over this little tidbit in the set-up, "might come to the realization that she possibly can be cured." With that in mind, I see Spiderman winning.


I wanted to leave some imagination to the reader of possibilities. Hopefully I did that. Thanks! :)

#23 Callisto

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 06:15 PM

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
FoxFingers gives it a grade of [A] - Nice one
DSkillz gives it a grade of [C] - Decent story, but a bit uneven, and many problems with tense.
SCORE
Spider-Man: 13
Mary Jane Watson-Parker: 4
Spider-Girl: 1
FPA: 3.0


#24 DSkillz

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 08:53 PM

Well, would you look at this...

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 05:55 AM

Ooh.

#26 treacherous

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 07:28 AM

Oh it's on. I'm about to start voting.

POST AN F NOW YOU SONUVASUCKA!

I will.

#27 Dinsdale Piranha

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 09:54 AM

ROFL! Nifty





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