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Match 12387 Mr. Hyde vs. Jack the Ripper


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#1 Culwych1

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 08:47 AM

Big Trouble in Old London

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Part 2 - A Cry in the Night

(Continued from Part 1 - Reserved Seat)

‘Now what!’ thought Tristan as the sergeant came running up.

“Sir! There’s been another murder!”

“Where?”

“At Whitechapel sir, it’s another lady Sir.”

Tristan sighed; first a series of inexplicable burglaries, happening right under the noses of the victims and now this; prostitutes being brutally murdered.

“Have we identified the victim” asked Tristan, massaging his temple.

“Yes sir, an associate of hers identified her as Elizabeth Stride also known as Long Liz. That’s the third one so far sir.”

“I know Sergeant. OK, I will come right away, let me just put someone in charge here.”

“Um, Sir, there’s something else as well”, the Sergeant looked down, almost ashamed.

“What?” growled Tristan.

“The press are involved, they are all over the crime scene and have dubbed this another case of Jack the Ripper.”

“Oh gods, get back there and make sure they don’t disturb anything. Is a doctor on the way?”

The sergeant nodded then ran away as fast as he could.

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A while later, having put Sean Gordon in charge of the Opera House security, Tristan strode through the dark streets of Whitechapel. He wanted to cover his nose with his handkerchief at the ripe smells that assaulted his senses, but knew that would leave a bad impression should there be any lingering members of the press.

When he arrived at the scene the first thing he noticed was the blood. He gazed at the victim, her body lying on its side and the face turned towards a wall. She had a delicate silk handkerchief around her neck, and it was impossible to tell what colour it had once been. It was now red with blood from the deep gash in her throat. There was blood pooling around her face as well and Tristan saw to his disgust that all the teeth from her lower jaw were missing. Whether this was due to the attacker or just her lifestyle he did not know.

He turned to Doctor Jekyll at his side who was looking pale. He had briefly met Henry Jekyll from a previous case about a year ago, dealt with by his colleague John Utterson. A young girl had been trampled by a sinister figure named Hyde who had given Dr Jekyll’s address as his own. Tristan did not know any more about the case but knew that Jekyll had been cleared and more than willing to help the prosecutors with any questions.

“So doctor, any ideas?”

“Well, apart from the cut throat I can see no other damage. I was only called because I was the closest doctor on call, but I arrived much too late. A post-mortem should help reveal more.”

Tristan sighed again; “Well we will need more than a simple post-mortem to catch this killer. He’s an absolute beast and nothing seems to be able to stop him.”

“Do you have any leads at all?” asked the Doctor.

“None at all, it is as if he’s taunting us with every murder. The bastard! I heard of a police force in France who were at wits end to catch a notorious killer and in the end did the only thing left they could think of; they let a known killer go from prison with an official pardon if he managed to apprehend their man. Sometimes I wonder if they had the right idea - a beast to catch a beast.”

“Did it work?” Jekyll’s eyes were full of curiosity.

“Oh yes, he retraced his steps and caught him, splattered his brains with a shovel if I remember correctly.”

Tristan put away a notebook he had been scribbling in and shook the doctor’s hand.

“Well, I must be going. The officers will be interviewing witnesses and I will await the post-mortem. Thank you for coming at such short notice.”

“Not at all. It has been my pleasure.”

Tristan watched as Doctor Jekyll walked away, his head down and swore he heard the man muttering under his breath.

Had he paid more attention, he would have heard Doctor Henry Jekyll repeating again and again:

“A beast to catch a beast…”

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It was three hours later that Jack the Ripper met his next victim. Popular accounts state that the Ripper had killed three to date, but in reality the number was closer to thirty. He would leave one body on display, out in the open for the public’s eye whilst the others he would dispose of, never to be found. His razor sharp knife would never be satisfied with just the one victim per night.

He stalked the young lady, his cloak pulled tight around him against the bitter London weather. She was alone, as all his victims had been and looked dressed up for the Opera. He had heard it was in town and had been tempted to visit, but the appeal of the blade was much stronger.

Slowly he waited around a corner, his breathing steady as his eyes narrowed. This was the moment of truth that he waited for, the moment that defined his life; the moment the victim saw the blade and realised it was too late.

Then suddenly the young lady fell to the floor with a startled whimper. A man stood over her with a heavy walking cane in his hand. He was the ugliest man the Ripper had ever seen, hunched over and repulsive. He laughed as he hit her again and again with the stick, her head cracking open like an egg.

The Ripper stepped out of the shadows and gazed at the man in wonder.

“Ahhhh, Jack the Ripper, I thought I could smell you. I’ve been looking for you for hours.”

The infamous blade suddenly appeared in the Ripper’s hand as he gazed at the incarnation of pure evil. He smiled.

“The pleasure is all mine, Mr…?”

“Hyde, Edward Hyde. I’m a big fan of your work and would love to chat about its delicate intricacies, unfortunately however, my continued existence depends on stopping you from carrying out your art.”

“That truly is a disappointment” said the Ripper, slowly edging forward, mindful of the other’s heavy cane.

Then, without a further word, the two incarnations of evil launched themselves at each other. They laughed as they did, rejoicing in battle and blood, slaughter and sin. They trampled over the young woman’s body without a thought and each knew that only one would walk away from this encounter.

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 08:48 AM

Learn More About
Mr. Hyde
Read more about Mr. Hyde at Wikipedia
Official Site: Public domain Links: Wikipedia Questia glencoe

Jack the Ripper
Read more about Jack the Ripper at Wikipedia
Official Site: 20th Century Fox Movies Links: Wiki Official Website IMDB



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Posted 15 August 2012 - 11:01 AM

That was pretty damn cool. I have to give it to Hyde. He's brutal, merciless and probably more used to brawling than Jack who is more of a stalk them, stab them. scatter them killer. The cane has better range and power than the knife too. Unless Jack can throw it with a degree of skill. Still betting on Hyde though.

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 12:10 PM

Crap on a crapper. Another member's about to leap-frog me. *Thinks about writing a match* Oh, hello, stack of unfinished games next to TV... *Poofs* :ph34r:

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 02:11 PM

That was pretty damn cool. I have to give it to Hyde. He's brutal, merciless and probably more used to brawling than Jack who is more of a stalk them, stab them. scatter them killer. The cane has better range and power than the knife too. Unless Jack can throw it with a degree of skill. Still betting on Hyde though.


Agreed, entirely. Hyde for the eventual win.

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 02:33 PM

BADASS! In a straight up fight, probably Hyde. But seeing how cunning Jack is, he'll probably find a way to outwit Hyde if muscle doesn't work.

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 03:00 PM

Was Jack that smart, in combat?

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 04:51 PM

neither are immortal, ambush vs strength, mr hyde could do damage but his weapon is not made for killing unlike jacks weapon which is a knife, was made to kill

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 05:51 PM

The cane is superior to the knife in terms of reach, and Hyde is physically superior to Jack, so even if Hyde is surprised by Jack there will be a decent fight, ending with Jack's death.

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Posted 16 August 2012 - 04:36 PM

Was Jack that smart, in combat?

I'm not sure about combat, but the fact he eluded capture and identification by everyone else says something about his smarts. I wouldn't be suprised if he was a pragmatist in combat too.

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 05:58 AM

True, i was thinking that myself, but it wont really help him in a straight up fight, unless he uses the element of surprise extremely well, but even then, this is Mr Hyde he's dealing with. Also, it was a lot easier back then to do the kinds of things Jack did without being caught.

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 09:20 AM

Pay attention boys! Grab a seat and sit back. Enjoy the show. One of the CBUB's finest writers is taking the stage!

Anyways, great match Culwych. My only complaint is that you spelled "color" wrong. We all know there's no "u" there.

As for the battle, I'm pulling for Mr. Hyde. The man is a fearsome fighter, and while the Ripper may have never been caught, that doesn't mean he's such a clever fighter. Anyone can take down defenseless young women. Let's see the Ripper handle a fellow monster! Let justice be served!

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 01:57 PM

Wow, some great comments - thanks all, it is appreciated. To be honest, I have to say that my faith in CBUB is somewhat restored in regards to comments populating fights that aren't Marvel, DC or DBZ.

As the comments have mentioned, Hyde does have the weapon with the longer reach but by the same token, Jack's is the deadlier and we are also matching ferocity VS smarts in combat. I have no idea which way this will go and am surprised it hasn't been done.

Again, thanks for all the comments - and Marv, I'll work on my American if you work on your English :D

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 03:49 PM

Haha. Work on my English? Alright, I've seen my fair share of Monthy Python, Fawlty Towers, and Mr. Bean movies, challenge accepted!

"Jolly good fun there Culwych. Love to see you back in our midst. It's been a bloody long time since I've seen you write. All these new fellows are fine writers, but they lack your knack for lengthy arcs.

Blimey! My tea is too sweet! Fiddle Sticks! Well that's just rubbish! Now what will I sip as I watch the tube?? Specially now that football is coming back. I guess I'll have to go down and get pissed as Chelsea gets clobbered by Arsenal

Oh, pardon me Culwych. Just a little personal mishap. Like I said, I do have a soft spot for your matches. I fancy them for their use of individual characters. I actually recall a detective chap you used to write about. Wonder if I can find those old matches in the records.... Bur I've taken too much of your good time. Hope to see more smashing matches mate! Cheerio!"

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 04:01 PM

Haha. Work on my English? Alright, I've seen my fair share of Monthy Python, Fawlty Towers, and Mr. Bean movies, challenge accepted!

"Jolly good fun there Culwych. Love to see you back in our midst. It's been a bloody long time since I've seen you write. All these new fellows are fine writers, but they lack your knack for lengthy arcs.

Blimey! My tea is too sweet! Fiddle Sticks! Well that's just rubbish! Now what will I sip as I watch the tube?? Specially now that football is coming back. I guess I'll have to go down and get pissed as Chelsea gets clobbered by Arsenal

Oh, pardon me Culwych. Just a little personal mishap. Like I said, I do have a soft spot for your matches. I fancy them for their use of individual characters. I actually recall a detective chap you used to write about. Wonder if I can find those old matches in the records.... Bur I've taken too much of your good time. Hope to see more smashing matches mate! Cheerio!"


Ha! Seriously laughing out loud! That was totally radical dude!

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 04:24 PM

Another great match, Culwych! I'm anxious to see where your arc goes from here.

As for this match, like the others, I'd say that Hyde wins this. Stronger and quicker, and longer reach with his cane.

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Posted 17 August 2012 - 05:54 PM

The cane is superior to the knife in terms of reach, and Hyde is physically superior to Jack, so even if Hyde is surprised by Jack there will be a decent fight, ending with Jack's death.



I agree

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 11:23 AM

Great match & setup, Hyde wins

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 11:15 AM

Match Final Results
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A Another great set-up! Can't wait for part 3!
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Mr. Hyde: 18
Jack the Ripper: 15
FPA: 3.6


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Posted 20 August 2012 - 01:51 PM

:huh: A 'C'? By the way, that blue font is killer on the eyes. At least, on the "Dark" theme.

DamagEdit: Just that one theme. Looks fine on the others.




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