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[a guy]

Lobo looked at the picture of his target with a smile Forks, Washington a certain Edward Cullen the employer’s Blade, the Daywalker , and wife Buffy “the Chosen One” Summers were paying in an undisclosed 9 digit sum one credit less and Blade would have some hell to pay and Buffy Lobo relished the thought she’d not make it out…unscarred either with that in mind Lobo got on the Spacehog and rode to Forks
It was another boring day in the life of Bella Swan she’d had to pick between Jacob Black and Cullen for THE 9^TH TIME THIS WEEK and it was only Tuesday she needed a Extraterrestrial creature of the male variety she needed someone that looked like a KISS fan gone awry someone who looked into the eyes of fear and smashed it’s drink over fear’s head she needed… “Lobo!” Cullen yelled he had to stop whooshing in on her like that “RUN” said Cullen “I’ll handle this”
Lobo snarled “Cullen still jealous I got that Twei’lek over at Jabba’s palace and you got that’s right not a fraggin’ thing” “No I have Bella” Lobo then SAW her and lusted for her as she lusted for him maybe after this battle was over “shouldn’t take me to long though” thought Lobo. Cullen hit Lobo he was bleeding now “Bad idea fraggin with The Main Man little punk” Roared Lobo as he tackled Cullen sending him into the sunlight “ARGHHHHHHHHH” Lobo was temporarily blinded by the flash as his eyes adjusted he realized “This bastiech SPARKLES this’ll be even easier than I thought and then I’ll take the Akita-Fem and do unspeakable things to her a hot Akita-Fem, a MASSIVE payday, and I get to rip this fairy trash apart I love this job” thought Lobo as he ran forwardg charging for Cullen
Superman Level Strength Lobo w/“Blood Cloning” vs. Edward Cullen

[Callisto]

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Lobo
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Edward Cullen
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[AVP vs The Terminator]

I don't like spite matches. Even those against Stephanie Meyers and her terrible series.

[a guy]

It's not a spite match Edward could legitimetly put up a fight against Lobo or at the very least run from him *laughs* who am i tryin to kid Edward's toast

[kainboa]

whether you want to admit that it's a spite match or not, doesn't change the fact that it is a spite match.

On top of that first stumbling block, your setup is also fairly lacking in structure, making it nigh unreadable.

[patrickthekid]

But... we must continue sacrificing the vampire to sate our hatred of the franchise...

[sirmethos]

F

[DSkillz]

Yeah, set-up could've used more work, a guy. A lot of run-ons and no spacing here.

As for the match, Edward should've broken his hand on Lobo's jaw. Lobo turns the sparkling one into paste.

[a guy]

It's a LOBO story it's not supposed to make sense

[Austo191]

Lobo wins. Like super easily. Not even a contest. Unless! ..... Nope. Lobo wins.

[leroypowell3]

Am I the only person who has never seen Twilight? (I'm proud of that by the way)

[DamagingRob]

Am I the only person who has never seen Twilight? (I'm proud of that by the way)

*Raises hand* You're not alone.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
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F Spite match and horrible grammar in the setup.
C The match had potential with the concept, but it was marred with no spacing, run-ons, and bad matchup.
SCORE
Lobo: 23
Edward Cullen: 4
FPA: 0.9