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[potterpuppetpals]

The Setting: Peach's Castle

Princess Peach is taking a stroll through her gardens. She bends down and picks a daisy out of the ground. She sniffs it, then throws it away.

Peach: Ah, what a peaceful day. But I know Bowser's henchmen are coming to nab me any second now. Don't worry! I've come prepared.

Suddenly a pair of hammer brothers jump out of a bush. They run up to her and try to grab her, but she pulls a frying pan out of nowhere and knocks them both unconscious with it. Mario and Luigi burst out of the door.

Mario: Don't-a worry, princess! I'm-a coming!

Peach: Oh, there's no need, Mario. I've already dealt with the bad guys.

Luigi: Looks like Bowser's ran out of ideas. He's used the exact same strategy for the last 2 months!

Mario: Yeah, and I won't have a job if he keeps it up!

Peach: No you won't Mario. You're a plumber, aren't you?

Mario: Oh yeah. I forgot about that. Oh well, see you later, princess.

An hour later, and the hammer bros regain consciousness...

Hammer Bro 1: Ugh... What happened?

Hammer Bro 2: The princess knocked us out. Again.

Hammer Bro 1: Oh! How are we gonna explain this to King Bowser!?

Hammer Bro 2: Well, we could always run away...

Hammer Bro 1: Actually, that's not a bad idea. Let's get outta here!

Kamek: Oh no, you don't!

Kamek appears out of nowhere and grabs the two hammer bros!

Hammer Bro 1: Ulp! Kamek!

Kamek: You two are coming with me! King Bowser isn't in a very good mood today, considering it's his turn to look after the kids. You'll both be lucky if you're not executed!

Kamek drags the hammer bros back to Bowser's castle.

Bowser: WHAAAAAT!?!?!

Hammer Bro 2: Look, we're sorry your highness, but she was just too powerful and-

Bowser: All you had to do was kidnap the princess and you couldn't even do that!

Kamek: Perhaps we could call that Jason Voorhees fellow again?

Bowser: No way! Not after what he did! It was a good thing you mastered the resurrecting spell so you could resurrect me. I'm sick of always having to do everything myself around here! I'm going to go kidnap the princess alone!

Kamek: But sire! The kids! You need to-

Bowser: I don't have to do anything! You're gonna have to look after them!

Kamek: Er... I can't, you put me on bathroom duty.

Bowser: Well call a nanny then!

Kamek: Yes sir.

Wendy Koopa: Hey! Kamek!

Kamek: (cringe) What is it, young mistress?

Wendy Koopa: Where's papa goin'!? He said he'd play games with us tonight!

Kamek: Sorry kids but daddy's gone out on an errand. I was just about to call a nanny in to look after you all.

Larry Koopa: A nanny!? Bleeugh! I bet she'll make us all tidy our rooms and brush our teeth and everything!

Ludwig Von Koopa: Since when have we ever done as we're told?

Lemmy Koopa: Yeah! We'll eat that nanny for breakfast! Literally!

Kamek calls every nanny in the Mushroom Kingdom, but all of them are eaten or chased off by the Koopalings. But one day, Kamek gets a call from a nanny calling herself Nanny McPhee, who says she's more than capable of looking after the Koopalings...

Kamek (to the phone): OK then, come round a 6!

At precisely 6 O' Clock somebody knocks at the door. Kamek goes over to open it.

Kamek: Nanny McPhee, I presume?

Nanny McPhee: Yes. Can I come in?

Kamek: Certainly, certainly. The kid's rooms are just up the stairs.

Nanny McPhee: I'll go up there immedialtely.

Kamek: Good luck. You're gonna need it!

Nanny McPhee: Oh I don't need it. I've had plenty of experience with naughty children.

Kamek: Bet you've never had to look after kids as naughty as them!

Nanny McPhee: I wouldn't bet too much. I've dealt with the naughtiest children in the land, and I'm not going to let this lot beat me!

So, can Nanny McPhee tame the Koopalings? Or will she get eaten alive like the rest of the nannies?

[Callisto]

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Nanny McPhee
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[Z451]

These kids might just be out of McPhee's control.

[Peypeypeypey]

C on the Set-up. It was okay, but I feel that it really should have been longer. Try working on describing stuff more rather than just saying "Bowser: (Stuff) Nanny McPhee: (More Stuff)". I feel that that just makes it more difficult to read. You should put time into describing it more.

As for the fight, I disagree with Z451. McPhee's got this

[iceeater24]

the koopalings would destroy her.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
C
C Try to do a little more with your set up like 4pey said
SCORE
Nanny McPhee: 7
Koopalings: 24
FPA: 2.0