Posted 14 July 2012 - 11:33 AM
Bob looked outside the window and saw his adversary.
Bob Grham phoned Lechuck.
Bob: oh my god, i see Marshall James Anderson, he has come to kill me and he looks Mad.
Lechuck: what i am supposed to do?
Bob: get over here and help me!
Bob: oh no! he's here!
James then kills Bob.
Bob then wakes up in a strange place.
Bob: where am i?
Manny: you are in the land of the dead.
my names Manny Calavera.
i am your new travel agent.
Bob: why do you have to dress up like the Grim Reaper?
it looks intimidating.
Manny: thats some people say that about my costume.
Manny then gives Bob a tour.
meanwhile in the land of the living.
James Anderson invited Kyle Katarn, Guybrush Threepwood and Indiana Jones over to help rebuild his ranch.
afterwards they had a party that was interupted by gunfire.
Hector: this party's over.
prepare to die James Anderson.
James: what do you want?
Hector: i am bored so i want to kill someone.
so i thought i'd kill you.
James: we shall see.
James and Hector shoot at the same time killing them both.
the last thing's James heard where the guest's screaming his name and his daughter screaming DAAAAAAD!
James and Hector woke up in the same place Bob Grham went to.
James wandered thorugh the strange place and saw a man dressed like the Girm Reaper.
James: who are you supposed to be?
Manny: i am Manny Calavera. your new Travel Agent.
James: you don't look like no travel agent.
are you drunk or something? it's not Halloween.
Manny: you dare call me drunk?
you made me very Angry.
Posted 14 July 2012 - 02:04 PM
Posted 19 July 2012 - 03:15 PM
B Try using standard dialogue. "I thought I told you to get out of here!" he said. Etc...
Manny Calavera: 4
Marshall James Anderson: 11
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