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[carew12]

carew12 Enter your Set-Up for the match here. This is your post - it belongs to you - and you may use the EDIT function at any time in the future to update this post.

Part 1 of ???


In an old, disused foundry, a group of super-powered terrorists known as the Brotherhood of Mutants reside, their leader Mystique stands before them and speaks "Senator Kelly's press conference is scheduled to proceed at 4:30, but as our friend Destiny has confirmed, the conference will be postponed for 10 minutes," She continues "We can also assume the X-Men will attempt to halt our plans. That is why the majority of us, Blob, Unus, Stacy-X, Mellencamp, Lady Mastermind will lead a distraction, allowing Sabretooth, Outlaw, Arclight, Avalanche and I to silence Kelly,"

On the day of Senator Kelly's conference, the Brotherhood distraction wreck havok through the streets in order to draw the attention of the X-Men from the conference. When the X-Men learnt of the Brotherhoods antics, a team was dispatched consisting of Rouge, Gambit, Beast, Colossus and Pixie.

So its;
Blob, Unus, Stacy-X, Mellencamp, Stacy-X and Lady Mastermind
-vs-
Rouge, Gambit, Beast, Colossus and Pixie.

[Callisto]

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[DSkillz]

carew13, I think it's been some time since you've made a match here, so you probably don't know that the way matches get posted has changed. Check here:

http://www.electricf...showtopic=25316

[Marvel Man]

Blob, Unus, Stacy-X, Mellencamp, Stacy-X and Lady Mastermind
-vs-
Rouge, Gambit, Beast, Colossus and Pixie.

Huh. Normally, when I see a Brotherhood with such geniuses and powerhouses like Blob and Unus "The Untouchable", I can't imagine anyone beating them... (obvious sarcasm here)

But seriously, this Brotherhood squad is made up of pretty low level baddies. Sure, they look good on paper, but against the experience of Colossus, Beast, Rogue, and Gambit, they're going down.

MARVANOTE: Pixie though? I don't like her that much. Hope Blob bodyslams her.

[DSkillz]

Good to see you have a set-up up now, but it really needed to be worked on more. This isn't a lot above being a rumble. Also, try making some crossover matches.

And the X-Men take this, as usual.

[DamagingRob]

Also, removing the "carew12 Enter your Set-Up for the match here. This is your post - it belongs to you - and you may use the EDIT function at any time in the future to update this post," would make it look better, too.

[LoneWolf]

Edit the default intro to your match. Just delete it as soon as you paste the set-up in.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
F It's barely better than a rumble, and there's several obvious errors in the setup.
C Your set up wasn't bad, per say, but it wasn't remarkable either. I wish you'd flesh out the story just a bit more. Then I'd give you a higher grade.
C
C Need to edit the intro. Why is Stacy-X listed twice? Expand on set-up.
D Something of a story, but needed to be proofread and expanded upon more.
F
SCORE
Brotherhood of Mutants: 3
X-Men: 42
FPA: 1.3