Posted 25 June 2012 - 02:44 AM
This takes place during World War Hulk
Hulk has arrived with his Warbound seeking to punish those that sent him into exile. He is not alone and he is pissed off.
The Pantheon saw this coming as the oracle predicted the return of the Hulk. The Pantheon contacted SHEILD and Nick Fury telling him of the approach but they did not believe this to be true. The second Hulk was on earth they got back in touch with the Pantheon and asked for their help. They were willing and were waiting.
Ajax is the powerhouse of the Pantheon matching Hulk in strength and power though they do not know what has transpired since his banishment from earth. The Oracle said he would be different but not how. The Pantheon figured if anything was going to change it would be his power or abilities. The Pantheon modified the suit Ajax wears to increase his strength but the suit is now bulkier then ever. Ajax will not have the speed advantage but with a class 140 (in old lame Marvel ratings able to lift 140 tons) they believe he has the power to stop the Hulk
Hulk offers the world the chance to give up those who sent him into space but the refuse stating what was done may have been a mistake but they will not give over any of earths heroes.
The Hulk heads for the city only to be met by Ajax.
“Ajax old friend you don’t want to get involved with this.”
Ajax doesn’t listen, he has always wanted to test his power against the Hulk going all out and he is confident he will come out on top. They have had small scraps before but this is for the win.
Ajax is ready and goes full bore to the Hulk who stands his ground. Ajax hits with a foce that woul cave in hoover dam but it does not budge the Hulk. Ajax pauses but only for a second, he knows to push the attack.
"I gave you your chance old friend." Hulk clenches his fists.
Posted 25 June 2012 - 02:45 AM
World War Hulk
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Posted 25 June 2012 - 02:50 AM
Posted 25 June 2012 - 11:38 PM
With this match the way it is now, I personally wouldn't give it higher than a "C". Fortunately, you can now edit your matches at any time, so you may want to make improvements on this one before rating ends for it if you want higher grades.
Frankly, the only complaints I've seen so far are from you, another guy that also recently made a WWH match, and some others.
Posted 26 June 2012 - 12:19 AM
Posted 29 June 2012 - 09:29 PM
Posted 30 June 2012 - 07:15 AM
C Several grammar errors, and reads more like a rumble in some places.
World War Hulk: 20
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