Posted 15 June 2012 - 07:22 PM
Posted 18 June 2012 - 02:11 PM
Posted 18 June 2012 - 02:17 PM
I don't understand the question, but if you're asking how can she survive Darkseids Omega beams, thats because it doesn't fully affect Kryptonians.
So overall you are saying that the power cosmic would obliterate Power Girl to where she couldn't take the blasts? This sparks off another question since everyone is so high on Darkseid, this would mean his omega beams would be nothing compared to the Surfer in this case, yet Power Girl could do how much damage to him if any?
Posted 18 June 2012 - 02:37 PM
As for the match, yeah, Radd takes this. He has too many powers to lose, and since he's completely under Galactus's control, he's very likely not going to hold back.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:42 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:00 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:25 AM
I don't watch run ons, I don't watch grammar I just write. Seems pointless to me for you guys to keep saying that stuff. I really think you should just let the grammar stuff go, its about fun not structure of sentences. No offense, just be glad we write and give activity to your forum..why isn't that enough? Just leave the comments out about the grammar stuff I am not changing..if its not good enough for you then fine...
It's called "criticism". If you don't learn to take it, you'll never be a good writer.
You don't have to take it, but expect to be graded accordingly.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:58 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:15 AM
B Good setup and it set up the fight perfectly.
B Good story and characterization. Just watch the sentence structure and differenciate between thoughts and spoken word a little better.
C Very confusing and difficult to understand. Silver Surfer was rather out of character, too. Also a large mismatch in his favor.
F The grammar sucks.
B Not a bad set up sir.
Power Girl: 7
The Silver Surfer: 40
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:42 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:44 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:47 AM
Also, how can a bot be biased you idiot, that's like saying a rock is a dumbass.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:52 PM
How is Surfer out of character when as we all know at one time he supported galactus? I didn't deserve and F they just don't like my views. Wow...I get an A on my last one and a B on this one. CBUB is so unfair and Callisto is biased. Yeah I said it. UNFAIR and BIASED! Nobody here is an EXPERT!!!
Posted 19 June 2012 - 04:11 PM
I gave this a "B" myself. The third one on the list in Callisto's post, in fact.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 06:23 PM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 06:55 PM
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