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[chaditude]

The decepticons are trying to take over Earth again but in New york city a monster is destroying all in his path but is taken down by a missle.Megatron thretens the beast and says if he spares his life if he goes.Fin fang foom responds by throwing megatron threw stark tower.Ok I guess I will have to kill you,Megatron says angrly.New york city citizins watch as their homes are destroyed only one monster will survive but New york city wont.

[Callisto]

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[patrickthekid]

You'll have to write in a setup up, unless you want to write it as a rumble match instead.

[chaditude]

the decepticans are trying to take over earth again but in new york city a monster destroys all in his path but is taken down by a missle megatron thretens the beast and says he will spare its life if he goes. fin fang foom responds by throwing megatron threw stark tower.Megatron says angrly. Ok i guess i will have to kill you, New york city citizins watch as homes are destroyed only one monster will survive but new york city wont

[DSkillz]

Patrickthekid meant post the set-up in the match's post, man. lol

I think you'll want to fix the spelling when and if you do edit the match's post.

[chaditude]

sorry got cunfused didnt even mean to put match up

[leroypowell3]

I don't think Foom could melt Megatron. Whatever version of Megatron this is, he's got the good to this alien dragon wannabe.

[Redemption X]

Fing Fang Foom and Megatron start fighting, then benfromcanada drags Fing Fang Foom away, yelling about how Foom is racist or magical or some crap like that and that Iron Man should only fight other humans in powered armor, leaving Megatron the winner by default.

[Marvel Man]

Hey, what's up Chaditude? 

Glad you got to posting matches. This match is pretty interesting, both opponents are at an about equal level, but the set up you posted needs some work. The story could be developed more, but even with what you have, you can improve your set up with some spacing, capitalization, and quotation marks. Here's the same set up with modifications:

The Decepticons are trying to take over Earth again, but in New York City a monster destroys all in his path. This monster is taken down by a missile. 

Megatron threatens the beast and says he will spare its life if he leaves. Fin Fang Foom responds by throwing Megatron through Stark Tower. 

Megatron angrily says, "Ok i guess i will have to kill you."

The citizens of New York watch as homes are destroyed. Only one monster will survive but New York City won't.

See, your story has a couple plot holes, but it's a start. I hope you keep working on it. Make sure to space out your set up so it doesn't appear as a massive block of text. Use quotation marks or at least ":" to place dialogue apart. And finally, capitalize words that need capitalization. 

Anyways, for this match I'm going with Megatron. The guy is much smarter than the dragon and has an impressive arsenal. D on the set up though. 

[chaditude]

thanks i'll work on it next time just in rush on match

[chaditude]

just so you know the apperence of stark tower does not mean iron man will be in this match he will be in the follow up match iron man vs megatron

[Marvel Man]

Haha. Alright. Cool.

[chaditude]

oh and how do you sign up for june challenge

[DSkillz]

oh and how do you sign up for june challenge

Heh, a newer user's thinking of signing up? I like the spirit of it, at least. Next time, though, post questions like this in either the topic in question or the FAQ forum.

But yeah, just make your match for the challenge before the deadline (try to make sure it follows the challenge's guidelines or it may get disqualified) and post the link to it in the challenge's topic.

[chaditude]

THANKS I WILL START WORKING ON IT

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
F
C Thumbs up for writing up a little something on a accidental set up. Appreciate it.
D Keep working on it. Best of luck on next match.
F No set-up.
F
SCORE
Fin Fang Foom: 12
Megatron: 21
FPA: 0.9

[MarvelFan15]

It amuses me how the match results are numerical palindromes of one another.