#1
Posted 05 June 2012 - 12:05 AM
Divinity was soaring through the skys when Violent screams were heard from a dark alley.
Victam: "Arrrghhh!"
Divinity:"What do you think your doing!"
Jennifer Blood:"Who THe Hell Are You And Why Must You Interupt My Feast."
Divinity:"The Name is none of Your Concern now unhand that woman you vile beheamoth!"
Jennifer Blood: "As You wish!"
Thus she threw the helpless this led to divinity Lunging at her With a left fist.
*Note* im new to this so please be paitient with me and try and give me constructive critisim for me thank you.
#2
Posted 05 June 2012 - 12:05 AM
Divinity
Origination: Divine
Alignment: Hero
Team: The Angels of Mercy
Jennifer Blood
Origination: Eldritch
Alignment: Villain
Team: Solo Villain
#3
Posted 05 June 2012 - 12:13 AM
Yay 1st Post
#4
Posted 05 June 2012 - 06:35 PM
Now as far as the match is concerned. Heh can't a women eat without being interrupted. You don't interrupt a vampire and her meal. Thats a no.....no.....
#5
Posted 05 June 2012 - 06:38 PM
You should have put the character in the character analysis thread first before putting her in the system. Thats what I did with Jennifer Blood and I received great help on how to improve her. Thats usually what you do before you put her in the system. If you need any help then ask one of the FPL veterans or just look to the FPL general discussion or FAQ thread. Also if you need help on setups just look to how the more experienced FPL members do there setups.
Now as far as the match is concerned. Heh can't a women eat without being interrupted. You don't interrupt a vampire and her meal. Thats a no.....no.....
yeah i know it was a huge mistake so i figured id delete him and start over. thanks though
#6
Posted 10 June 2012 - 06:01 AM
Jennifer Blood Won a match against Divinity
5 to 1
Overpowering Win ... Brutal Loss: Fame points doubled!
Divinity: -50 fame points
Jennifer Blood: 50 fame points
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