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[batmanKing989]

The fantastic four was under attack my doctor doom once again while robots helped him thing smashed them, but then he heard a terrible cackle, wild child had been observing him.

Wild Child: you are so funny, ya wimp, come on lets see if you can catch me

Wild Child cackles as thing chases him up the stairs.

Wild Child: what's wrong fatty too fast for ya

Thing: fatty! why i'm gonna clobber you!

[Callisto]

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[AVP vs The Terminator]

The Rumbles function. Use it.

[DSkillz]

I think I'll wait and see if you actually add any stories to these matches. If they still look the same on the fifth day they're up, I'll give a "Bad" to all of them.

Seriously, if you had done this in the Rumbles, you could've avoided hearing critiques. And if you need any kind of help writing matches, I'm sure there are a few people here that could lend a hand.

[LoneWolf]

Thing would spank him.

[batmanKing989]

I think I'll wait and see if you actually add any stories to these matches. If they still look the same on the fifth day they're up, I'll give a "Bad" to all of them.

Seriously, if you had done this in the Rumbles, you could've avoided hearing critiques. And if you need any kind of help writing matches, I'm sure there are a few people here that could lend a hand.

yeah but the thing is that i make MOVIES not stories but i can set up a mathc with some pinpoints to prove the winner

[batmanKing989]

I think I'll wait and see if you actually add any stories to these matches. If they still look the same on the fifth day they're up, I'll give a "Bad" to all of them.

Seriously, if you had done this in the Rumbles, you could've avoided hearing critiques. And if you need any kind of help writing matches, I'm sure there are a few people here that could lend a hand.

ok this match is short and still a little weak but the spiderman v.s batman match is changed and ready for takeoff

[batmanKing989]

The Rumbles function. Use it.

psssshhh, whatever i changed the matches happy? if not i need a lawyer lol

[DSkillz]

Alright, there's the start of a story here, but you'll have to add a lot more to get out of the D-F range.

[Nova Force Nova]

What are you guys talking about? I laughed my ass off at this setup.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
F An incredibly short and unimpressive Rumble
F
F No story whatsoever.
F You need to be creating Rumbles only, because you clearly don't understand how to write a match setup. Boooooo.
D Close to awful. Needs a lot of work. Sorry man, this set up isn't getting a good score from me.
F No real story, full of spelling and grammar errors.
SCORE
The Thing: 39
Wild Child: 3
FPA: 0.6

[Shockwave]

yeah but the thing is that i make MOVIES not stories but i can set up a mathc with some pinpoints to prove the winner

Movies are a form of STORYTELLING. Stories tell tales, movies need stories to move ahead.

And if you already have a winner picked out, why even post to begin with?

I'll hold judgement, but I might be giving a C as a best.

[DSkillz]

Heh, you're way too late, man. Look at the post above yours.

[Shockwave]

Are you so sure? Maybe I knew I was late and just wanted to make a point.