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[iceeater24]

Venom is in a dark alley waiting for someone to walk by so he can absorb them into his body. Suddenly, he hears the sound of claws. He peaks around the corner to see a man with burned face, a striped sweater, and a fedora. Freddy motions Venom to come at him and of course he did. He throws a few left and right punches at Freddy but when the fists came at him he sliced them off. Venom grew them back and picked up a fire hydrant and fired it at Freddy. It hit him sending him crashing into a building. The time was 2:00am and nobody was out but that changed when people heard all the noise. Venom absorbed a few people to get stronger. He was about a couple inches bigger. Freddy came out of the debris sprinting at Venom. He sliced right through the stomach. Venom was knocked out for a short period of time so that meant Freddy could go inside his head. Freddy can do anything inside a dream. Venom is wondering around in some sort of building. The floor suddenly turns to blood. Venom jumps out and sticks to a wall. The blood turns into freddy. He leaps at Venom and lets out a powrful screetch scaring the symbiote off Venom. Now he is just Mac Gargan. Freddy slowly walks toward him but Mac is frozen in shock. He swings at Mac with his blade but then he wakes up. Now that there back in the real world, Venom is angry that he was humiliated in his sleep. He leaps at freddy. He jumps out of the way. Who will win this intense fight? You decide!

[Callisto]

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Venom (Mac Gargan)
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[bigballerju]

Since you wrote a setup at least and it was slightly decent you get a C. Next time take the time to explain it so at least people understand the fight completely. Give us a good reason or at least a decent one as to why there fighting and don't make it so simple either.

I think this fight is in the dream world cause it said in the setup Freddy went into his head meaning his dreams. Although I give him credit to how Freddy went back into the dream world in the short setup actually is good way for him to do so. Freddy waiting for his enemy to be knocked out so he could go back in is a smart way. Don't know if he can actually do it though.

Now Freddy knocking Venom out for a short period of time may be a stretch cause we don't knock how strong Freddy is in the real world.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results
USER RATINGS
C
D Meh. A block of text that just says what happens. A setup should be artistic and suspenseful and exciting. This one wasn't.
SCORE
Venom (Mac Gargan): 19
Freddy Krueger: 12
FPA: 1.5