Posted 06 May 2012 - 04:00 PM
"Hey, Hey bandits! Where are we going?" Said Apple, aboard a plane with his two kidnappers.
"Los Angeles you fool" replied the mobster.
"We're going to get lost!? Whats the fun in that!?" Apple wondered aloud.
"No not a lost, Los!" Replied the mobster angrily
"Ignore him, Tony, we're here" Muttered the psychic.
Here would be above a run-down area in Los Angeles, where one could easily draw a crowd and watch thugs fight. Upon being dumped into a sack and thrown out of the plane, Apple screamed "Wow, I didn't know you had so much baggage!".
Miraculously, we landed on a sofa and rolled out. The first thing his eyes laid upon was a drab-looking man, appearing quite bored.
"Hey, Hey weird guy!" shouted Apple, receiving a stare. "Why are you so bored? "
Seeing potential amusement in this fruit, the man sent a weak mind attack to gauge this new individual.
"You're an apple, Hhahahah!" Was what he received. In response to this, the man decided to have as much fun as he possibly could and began a full assault.
Posted 06 May 2012 - 06:46 PM
Posted 07 May 2012 - 03:09 PM
Posted 07 May 2012 - 03:16 PM
It's one thing to mention copyrighted things in your writing, but you can't submit a character into the FPL that was created by someone else. There's room for parodies and the like, but everything I saw about The Annoying apple was you taking Orange jokes and changing one or two words. That isn't parody, that's just slapping a different name onto someone else's stuff.
Your other character is fine as far as I can tell, but yeah, no Annoying Apple. You can do better than that.
Posted 07 May 2012 - 03:45 PM
...and I really wish everyone would stop with this "show me the rule" stuff. I know that happened once and caused a big hubbub, but if the two Admins on the site tell you something, that officially becomes the rule. Trust us, we won't lead you down the wrong path even if my name is treacherous. You create that character and you are going to lose A LOT (Well, at least four times until it's disabled). You want, I can enable it and you'll find out if I'm right.
Posted 07 May 2012 - 04:37 PM
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