Posted 25 April 2012 - 05:18 AM
Posted 25 April 2012 - 05:18 AM
Toph Bei Fong
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Posted 25 April 2012 - 05:34 AM
Lady Shiva and Elektra Natchios stand in the throne room of Princess Azula
"I assume you are both wondering why I called you." says Princess Azula
"That would be a correct assumption." says Lady Shiva
"As you can see, the Fire Nation rules all that you can see. My empire stretches far and wide across this world. I have entire civilizations on the palm of my hand, entire cities bending down to my will, entire villages paying me tribute.
However, my grip on this world is not complete. There is still a pocket of insurgence, a rebellion that seeks to overthrow me and demolish my empire. And at the head of that rebellion lie two exceeding powerful warriors, the terrorists known as Toph Bei Fong and Sokka.
I have tried time and time again to either capture them or kill them. But they prove far too powerful for me, far too skilled and dangerous, their sprit far too strong to break.
I have thus failed to eliminate this threat. And if they continue to flourish, they may inspire others to take arms against the Fire Nation, and soon their rebellion will spread like a cancer infecting my empire.
That is why I called you here. You are two of the best assassins in the omniverse. Your skills are deadly, your intelligence is unmatched. You are just what I need to get rid of this thorn in my backside forever.
Thus, I want you find Toph and Sokka. Find them, and kill them. If you suceed, you will payed generously. However, you must not return here until Toph and Sokka are eliminated permanently. Do you understand?" says Princess Azula
"I understand." says Lady Shiva
"I understand, too." says Elektra
"Do you accept the job?" says Princess Azula
"I accept it." says Lady Shiva
"I accept it, too." says Elektra
"Good, because you have no choice. You are dismissed." says Princess Azula
Thus, Elektra and Lady Shiva leave the throne room, ready to find Toph and Sokka and kill them...
So, who wins this?
Posted 25 April 2012 - 07:11 AM
Posted 28 April 2012 - 10:14 AM
Posted 28 April 2012 - 12:22 PM
Toph and Sokka and barely handle Ty Lee and Mai, im sure one of the greatest martial artist in the marvel and dc universe could easily take them out. They have the skill training, experience, and knowledge over both Toph and Sokka. This is like a handicapped match, even though ilove Avatar this isn't a good match for these two kids to be involved in.
Right because Ty Lee isn't more acrobatic than either of these women, and can't stop benders and paralyze muscles with nothing more than a quick series of strikes. The teams are more evenly matched than some would like to admit. Sure in a pure h2h match they are clearly outclassed, but overlooking a powerful Earthbender is a little ridiculous.
Posted 30 April 2012 - 03:19 AM
But seriously, I'll be fair.
Not bad, Redemption. This might be an interesting fight. Toph's earth/metalbending would be tough to counter head on, but Electra and Shiva will likely study the kids for awhile before they make their move. Electra's ability to "throw" her mind into others would make Toph and Sokka that much easier to track. From there the ladies could possibly find the kids as they sleep and take them out with a long-range toss of their weapons.
BTW, Redemption, you had better send FoxFingers that e-mail and tell him exactly what happens when you log in so he can help you out. In the next couple of weeks, he's going to disappear again and you may be stuck with this problem for the forseeable future.
Posted 30 April 2012 - 12:25 PM
C This fight isn't bad, but I find it a bit lacking. The whole set-up is just describing in-detail how Azula failed to take Sokka and Toph out, and even then, I feel like Azula would have been much more insulting to them. Instead of calling them great warriors, she should have said something about how they were lucky enough, or how her people were incompetent enough to let them get away. Also, if Aang and Katara aren't there, there's no way Sokka and Toph would be a threat to the Fire Nation. These are all minor things, sure, but they were distracting to me when I read the set-up.All those things aside, the set-up just wasn't that interesting. I'm not really trying to be mean, and I'm not swaying it was awful, as I like the idea of the fight, but it really was just going in-depth about how Azula kept failing. In the future, perhaps try showing Azula fail in one of her plans, and show how much her not being able to capture them makes her angry, because it definitely would. Then give some reason that the other people would be outside of their universe. These are all pretty small things, and the set-up was okay, but I think the set-up would be much more entertaining if you worked on these things.
B Punctuation problems (though they may be part of your "signature style") and not enough characterization on the assassins keep this from an "A" grade.
Toph Bei Fong and Sokka: 7
Lady Shiva and Elektra: 9
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