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Match 11007 Justice Lords and Peter Petrelli vs. Sebastian Shaw and The Imperfects


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#1 L.I.C. (-Large In Charge-)

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 04:41 PM


As a mutant, Shaw possesses the ability to absorb energy and transform it into raw kinetic super strength. He was the leader of the New York branch of the Hellfire Club a team of mutants that he had controlled in order to start a war for mutant supremacy. The Justice Lords stopped him in a brutal battle in the city of Metropolis. However Shaw escaped and vowed revenge.

Now as a exclusive secret society bent on world domination, although to the public, he is a legitimate businessman and ordinary human. He now and continues funding the mutant-hunting Sentinel program to keep the Justice Lords from watching him and the rest under his thumb. Shaw realized that a more direct action would be needed in order to defeat the Justice Lords. So through his mutant-hunting Sentinel program Shaw captured certain mutants and augments to build up a team to fight the Justice Lords.

And through his patience in time, effort, and preparing, Shaw has created his new team called the Imperfects and they were Paragon, Ice-Out, Solara, Johnny Ohm, Brigade, Thumpdown, Red Feral, Hazmat, Fault Zone, and the Wink. However Shaw had discovered a gifted young man in the captives and he was Peter Petrelli. Peter didn't agree with either of Shaw's ideas or his master plan to blow up Metropolis with a thermo-nuclear bomb combined with a viral attack from a plague derived from Hazmat's own body.

Peter escape and Shaw sent Red Feral after him to kill him. However once Red Feral had caught up with Peter. Red Feral quickly learned that Peter took his bestial might and prowness with Peter's empathic mimicry. And Plus he has Shaw's powers too. And so there was a fight and Peter won and Red Feral died. Two Justice Lords Hawk Girl and Green Lantern appeared with some authorities. Peter told them everything and it took come convincing but they believed Peter in the end.

Learning of both Red Feral's defeat and The Justice Lords coming! Shaw and the nine other Imperfects went to Metropolis to set his plan. And Peter and the Justice Lords stop them in time?

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 04:41 PM

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Peter Petrelli
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Justice Lords
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Sebastian Shaw
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The Imperfects
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#3 bigballerju

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 09:20 PM

Okay setup but stomp match for Team one. Between Peter and the Justice Lords they win in seconds.

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 04:03 AM

Not going to get into the Imperfects that I never heard of like Red Feral, Thumpdown, and Ice-Out. But Team One obliterates the Imperfects and Shaw in an instant.

And with Peter in such close proximity to the Justice Lords I can't imagine the power boost he has going into the fight!

Note: Your setup reads a little jumpy, as if you were in a rush to write it. Try using more transition phrases or simply flesh out whats happening more in each scene




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