Upon awakening in a dark room Lois finds herself tied to a chair with a blue haired lady tied next to her. A voice comes over the P.A. system; Hello Marge and Lois and welcome 2 my game.
The voice informs them that their families are being held captive and they must fight to the death. The family of the losrr dies with them and to prove it a hatch in the ceiling opens and the heads of brian and grampa fall through.
" When you wake youll be on the arena where you may proceed to battle. May the best woman win. Oh and feel free to rip clothes as much as needed. Oh and theres a babby oil pit in the center of the ring." The voice says
Match 10915 Lois Griffin vs. Marge Simpson
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Callisto
, Feb 26 2012 08:59 AM
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Posted 27 February 2012 - 01:55 AM
Welcome to EF, whitedevil. Your set-up covers the basics on why Lois and Marge are fighting, but in the future you're going to be expected to make more of a story of your matches.
That and watch for some grammar errors.
That and watch for some grammar errors.
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Posted 29 February 2012 - 12:23 AM
saw setup mixed withlois griffin and marge simpson? good stuff, but wish it was longer. you shoulda had them go through jigsaws little funhouse and tests then meet up at the end somehow. but good even matchup nonetheless.
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Posted 02 March 2012 - 01:56 AM
welcome to the EF! please try to write to not 2 from now on:D
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