I'd be surprised if Rajom wasn't suspicious! Although, having no parents and living alone, he probably would've never heard of it in the first place. It was really more of a desperate gamble on the Yeerk's part, not out of character to my knowledge.
What do you mean, regarding the bit about the same guy?
True about paranoia, as for neighborhood watch thats up to jesus character on whether or not he finds it fishy. Not sayin it was OOC for yeerks, just that it wasnt full proof.
And I mean, after John finished talking, he sees them start to walk down the street. He releases Rajom who pecks him and John tosses him outside which is where he flies away and corv follows. That was less than a minute for sure, so not exactly time to setup a controller watch, and if it was already there and they presumably know about morph times its not that much of a tip off. Easily a wild goose chase.
Ok, so what is happening and what should I do?
Well read my above post, then turn into a pigeon I suppose, then we can hear Moe's thoughts...I bet their riveting.