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#81 ThreeDark

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 01:31 PM

Yeah, completely overstated power there. Eldritch Energy, for one, is not a summoning power it's just a blast of energy. If you want to summon creatures you either want Commander or Beast Master. Just summoning weapons is actually not within the purview of a street level character as the power for that (Creation) is Legendary and only available to Global or higher characters. That isn't to say you couldn't take something along the lines Slashing weapon and just say that you're summoning whatever weapon that seems to fit the situation.

#82 corvette1710

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 01:54 PM

Yeah, completely overstated power there. Eldritch Energy, for one, is not a summoning power it's just a blast of energy. If you want to summon creatures you either want Commander or Beast Master. Just summoning weapons is actually not within the purview of a street level character as the power for that (Creation) is Legendary and only available to Global or higher characters. That isn't to say you couldn't take something along the lines Slashing weapon and just say that you're summoning whatever weapon that seems to fit the situation.

Hrm... So "Creation" is only Global and up? Shart. I'll edit and find a few better suited to his... abilities. As long as uncooked eggs count as animals and the likes.

#83 Soberguy

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 02:03 PM

Hrm... So "Creation" is only Global and up? Shart. I'll edit and find a few better suited to his... abilities. As long as uncooked eggs count as animals and the likes.


Focus less on making supercoolawesomepowersthatcanlethimliketotallydoanything and focus instead on making him an interesting character. All I see is a guy who is stronger and smarter than everyone else who can do ANYTHING, and he decides to express that by extorting fifties off of high school students. That's not a character, dude.

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 02:04 PM

Editing some more...

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 02:07 PM

Also, aren't submissions closed anyhow? Didn't we already go through a whole drama about this?

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 02:08 PM

Also, aren't submissions closed anyhow? Didn't we already go through a whole drama about this?

Oh. :/

#87 Jason Redfield

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 02:43 PM

Also, aren't submissions closed anyhow? Didn't we already go through a whole drama about this?


Yeah, I believe your character was the last. Suffice it to say that wasn't the issue in question regarding the drama, but that's another matter.

Regardless of whether the character is accepted into the RP, you still might want to work on creating an interesting one for the database. Just keep working at it.




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