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#1 He who fights monsters

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Posted 08 July 2009 - 04:56 PM

In this RP, the heavens above would clash with the mortals. The celestial bureaucracy was becoming selfish. They were jealous of humanity, and looked out for themselves. Prayers were spoken, but no answer. One day, a select few decided to storm the gates, and bring what's correct back together. The angels and celestial beings would arm themselves for the conflict as well. The fate of existence would be shaped by the conflict.

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#2 Sir Exal

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Posted 13 July 2009 - 04:04 PM

Um. Okay, time period? Location? Any enviromental details? SOMETHING?

#3 He who fights monsters

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Posted 13 July 2009 - 04:37 PM

I would reveal it during the Official RP.

#4 ThreeDark

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Posted 13 July 2009 - 07:51 PM

Honestly, this is spectacularly unimpressive.

Giving your potential players (of which, at this time, there are zero) nothing but "Oh, hey, Angels and Heaven are making with the War" is ridiculous. Especially when you then ask for things like 'Powers' in the character description.

Revealing Nothing in the opening bid is like handing people character sheets without giving them any rules to make the characters with. Which is exactly what you're doing here.

#5 He who fights monsters

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Posted 14 July 2009 - 11:06 AM

I would consider your criticisms next time.




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